By the Water's Edge

The immortal wind wakens, blows and whispers to the wynd of trees as they are wickedly uprooted and move in confusion across the countryside in complete chaos. Their roots scornful and unbelieving uplifted from unrest and upheaval from their unyielding ground. The water spans and stand, bend, and rise as Poseidon, the god who watches with wild wonder the sea; lift up its waves and waver and waives a forcing force hold in mighty waves against the sand. Then, all comes to a calm as the land sits silent from its fear by the water's edge.
4/4/2019 Alliteration 004 (I prefer old poems)' Contest Info Sponsor Poet Destroyer A Wynd - Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wynd A wynd is typically a narrow lane between houses

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Date: 7/8/2019 5:20:00 PM
Great alliteration, Eve. Congratulations on your first place win. All the best~ Warren
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Date: 7/4/2019 9:42:00 PM
Alluring Alliteration. CCONGRATS to win
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Date: 4/11/2019 10:39:00 PM
Wow Eve, you have captured the fierce power the wind has over water, over land in this awesome poem. This gave me chills! Excellent! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/8/2019 1:00:00 PM
I was enraptured by the dramatic and dynamic content of this beautifully expressed poem and its captivating alliteration. Superb artistry, Eve. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/9/2019 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for the wonderful inspiring compliment and the good luck. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/4/2019 4:09:00 PM
Well written Eve :)
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Date: 4/9/2019 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/4/2019 1:20:00 PM
Your powerful poem clearly depicts the latest weather phenomena across the globe dearest, Eve! Excellent imagery!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/9/2019 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios, for the wonderful inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/4/2019 11:55:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery, eve. Good luck in the contest; I visualize this in the winner's circle.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/9/2019 3:07:00 PM
Thank you,Caren, for the wonderful inspiring compliment and the good luck. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/4/2019 7:17:00 AM
Very nicely flowing work, Eve:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/9/2019 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, Jo, for the wonderful inspiring compliment . Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/4/2019 6:32:00 AM
Ooh, that wind blew me right through each line, evenly! I'm sorry it's over; it was a great flight. Well done.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/9/2019 3:09:00 PM
Thank you, M.L., for the wonderful inspiring complimentk. Hugs Eve ~`*
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