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By the Water's Edge


          I dream of death and decay, 
of doom, dirt and dust;
             waltzing among wintry, 
windswept graves wretched. 
   My refrain and rhapsody ragged,
                 my agony and anguish aches;
                       then, I am falling, 
fathomless and fearful; 
          I wake by a winding water's edge,
  weeping under a whimsical weeping willow . . . 

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March 25, 2019


Poetry/Alliteration/By The Water's Edge
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1127-447-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Pick a Title Vol. 3, Alliteration
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Title chosen #4- By The Water's Edge

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 4/24/2019 8:31:00 PM
Great alterations, Dear Heart, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 4/25/2019 8:39:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations and hugs !
Date: 4/1/2019 12:34:00 PM
Wow Dear Heart - this poetry is beyond perfect , it echoes FAME! Poetry Hugs, Jenny.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/25/2019 8:39:00 AM
Jennifer, thanks so much for the nice comment and compliment, appreciate !
Date: 3/26/2019 5:06:00 AM
Ah, Monet would be proud and honored; this was lovely; best of luck in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2019 9:02:00 AM
ML, thank you for visiting with the lovely comment, I hope Monet does not mind I borrowed his painting, I always loved this one ~
Date: 3/25/2019 9:09:00 PM
Very poetical, great imagery, Constance.
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Date: 3/26/2019 9:02:00 AM
Caren, thanks for visiting with the compliment, appreciate !
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