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I dream of death and decay, of doom, dirt and dust; waltzing among wintry, windswept graves wretched. My refrain and rhapsody ragged, my agony and anguish aches; then, I am falling, fathomless and fearful; I wake by a winding water's edge, weeping under a whimsical weeping willow . . . _____________________ March 25, 2019 Poetry/Alliteration/By The Water's Edge Copyright Protected, ID 19-1127-447-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Pick a Title Vol. 3, Alliteration sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Title chosen #4- By The Water's Edge Fourth Place

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Date: 4/24/2019 8:31:00 PM
Great alterations, Dear Heart, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 4/25/2019 8:39:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations and hugs !
Date: 4/1/2019 12:34:00 PM
Wow Dear Heart - this poetry is beyond perfect , it echoes FAME! Poetry Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 4/25/2019 8:39:00 AM
Jennifer, thanks so much for the nice comment and compliment, appreciate !
Date: 3/26/2019 5:06:00 AM
Ah, Monet would be proud and honored; this was lovely; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/26/2019 9:02:00 AM
ML, thank you for visiting with the lovely comment, I hope Monet does not mind I borrowed his painting, I always loved this one ~
Date: 3/25/2019 9:09:00 PM
Very poetical, great imagery, Constance.
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Date: 3/26/2019 9:02:00 AM
Caren, thanks for visiting with the compliment, appreciate !

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