By the Subway

Sitting by the steps of the old avenue subway
In his ragged long sleeves shirt, he completes my day
In my year long rides, he never missed to say
Words of day to day sunshine ray

He's a man who never begged nor asked for a thing
A day without his radiance is a year without spring
In his shabby gray pants, he ruled the subway like a king
In his time of moon, he sleeps in his chalked-drawn ring

I walked by him, truth be told not just I
We all listened, shared his glee and bid goodbye
A one legged man, who soars so high
Gave everyone a soulful, joyful cry

He is the man many call, the subway sleeper
He reaps you off your sadness, known to others as the reaper
He rewrites our everyday journey; he's quite a fine writer
Come by the old avenue subway, there's a man known as the sweeper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/7/2015 5:16:00 PM
Sweepers are rare individuals - Even more so than starwalkers! For sweepers are sweepers of leaves, and every leaf is a living souls anguish and pain. They take our pains unto themselves...Leaving us with all their joys. Our pain is there solace...For only here will they find eternal redemption. Something of great significance has been revealed to you, commit it to memory...It will serve you well! My best regards! :-) john
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 1/26/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thank you for the wisdom, John :)...all the best.
Date: 8/17/2015 11:03:00 AM
What a beautiful poem! Loved how you expressed this!
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 8/30/2015 2:18:00 AM
thank you very much :)
Date: 8/17/2015 12:24:00 AM
the smallest things we notice....can surely reassure our focus....just a simple man doing simple things....sometimes that is all we need for joy to spring....;)
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 8/30/2015 2:18:00 AM
true indeed :)
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