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By the Lake

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How calm and serene is the blue lake today. In delight over the surface, some breams jump high. From afar I spy swans gliding my way, Warm sun invites birds to fly up in the azure sky. Beneath a tree, my love rests near me and I utter a sigh.

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/4/2021 6:46:00 PM

Oh the last line broke my heart... A great write with vivid imagery

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/1/2021 6:22:00 PM

Lovely thoughts. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2021 3:36:00 PM

Beautiful, Victor, I love that last line.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/1/2021 12:19:00 PM

Peace, serenity, love and swans gliding your way-your depiction of bliss captivates, Victor! Blessings, Evelyn

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/1/2021 8:43:00 AM

A gorgeous scene depicted in five lines of a picture perfect day and date! hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/1/2021 8:12:00 AM

Emotions of peace and sadness. Hugs...Kim

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/1/2021 7:52:00 AM

So beautiful with lovely imagery of the blue lake and swans gliding your way... God bless.. ~ Ani

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/1/2021 6:26:00 AM

Beautifully calm and spiritual Victor, water always holds that magic to take one to a calmer place. I enjoyed the read. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/1/2021 5:37:00 AM

Luxuriating by the lake--how pleasantly romantic and rhythmic is the tenor of your poem, Victor! Beautiful images!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/1/2021 5:19:00 AM

Hi Victor, You painted a lovely and peaceful picture with words. I found it very romantic as well. Great job. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/1/2021 5:05:00 AM

So sweet and romantic, beautiful imagery you paint, Victor:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2021 4:02:00 AM

Ahh!! How romantic. I used to like bream as a meal when young but the last time we caught some and cooked them they were far to fishy. Something got lost along the way. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem. Sara

Jenna Logan

Date: 5/1/2021 3:26:00 AM

What more could anyone need to feel complete? Nothing. Lovely lines, Victor.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/1/2021 3:00:00 AM

Spiritually serene

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/1/2021 2:54:00 AM

Hello Victor - This is lovely and I very much liked the quiet voice tone and scene. Thank you for sharing.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2021 2:38:00 AM

Have you ever found yourself in a moment of utter peace and tranquility while composing your own music? A great poem for calm and serenity Dear Victor

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2021 2:11:00 AM

What a tranquil place you've painted with your words Victor. Tom