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In the gloaming, there she is 
by the edge of the sea...

Rapt in contemplation; taking in 
the beautiful, peaceful scenery. She enjoys
watching the sun set over the horizon,
the chattering of starlings in the scarlet sky, 
waves splashing and exploding like dynamite 
against the rocks.

She loves dipping her toes in the shallows, 
the feel of the cool breeze on her skin. 
She puts her faith in the majestic sea to take 
all her woes and drowned them, to clear 
the dense fog clouding her thoughts, to cleanse 
memories too besmirched to retain.

The sea invites her to get away from it all, 
and she returns ever and anon to find 
some peace of mind, to listen to the sea reveal
its inscrutable secrets and confess 
some of her own. Nothing else in the world 
occupies her mind when she comes here. 

Time lounges on the beach 
fast asleep as she's lost in oblivion, 
communing with ghosts of the past 
and hopes for the future. 

In the gloaming, there she is...
by the edge of the sea...

Submitted for...
Your Best December Poem Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place)
Sponsored by: John Hamilton
Date written: 12/23/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/27/2019 9:21:00 AM
Congrats Edward-- really like that line 'Time lounges on the beach' ....
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/27/2019 2:26:00 PM
Thank you, L.J.:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 12/27/2019 7:33:00 AM
This poem deserves all the accolades received--excellent write--congrats, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/27/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
Date: 12/26/2019 10:22:00 PM
beautifully penned Edward...i love the ocean so could see this imagery perfectly... congrats on your win :) hugs
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/27/2019 5:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra:-)
Date: 12/26/2019 5:17:00 PM
Edward congrats on a great win!;)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/26/2019 6:37:00 PM
Thanks again, Brenda!:-)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/26/2019 5:17:00 PM
Again;)
Date: 12/26/2019 3:46:00 PM
This is stunning in it's imagery Edward, congrats on a fine win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/26/2019 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, John:-) Most obliged.
Date: 12/24/2019 9:40:00 AM
Edward wow congrats on a well deserved win!()
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/24/2019 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Brenda:-)
Date: 12/23/2019 1:27:00 PM
Hello Edward Ibh, a lake or river, ocean or sea are all relaxing for a peaceful mind. Merry Christmas. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/24/2019 12:12:00 PM
Hello Edward Ibh, i wish you the best for the new year. Merry Christmas. Your Friend, Darlene
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/23/2019 6:18:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by, Darlene:-) Happy holidays to you!
Date: 12/23/2019 7:39:00 AM
Edward, your appreciation of peace of mind and the sea are well represented.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/23/2019 8:47:00 AM
Thank you, Caren:-)

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