Vladislav Raven Poet Tanka

By Love's Shore

You stand by love's shore, 
your golden temple shining. 
A beautiful sun, 
glory ever rising true, 
come now walk into my soul.

You stand by love's shore, 
a breeze now does kiss your flesh. 
Gentle dreams of love, 
softly caressing your soul, 
your smile is sweet perfection.

You stand by love's shore, 
Aphrodite shining bright. 
You are beauty’s rose, 
the song of love in my heart, 
forever smile in my soul.

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Caren Krutsinger July 30, 2022 at 9:33 AM What a romantic tribute "Aphrodite shining bright. You are beauty’s rose, " Wow! Vladislav Raven July 30, 2022 at 2:53 PM Hi Caren, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I didn't quite know if it would work in the Tanka form but it seems to have turned out quite well. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Bill Baker July 29, 2022 at 2:05 PM Seems you can create beautiful love poetry in many forms, Mike. The Tanka fit well with your message my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Vladislav Raven July 30, 2022 at 2:28 PM Hi Bill, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always seem to find my inspiration by love's shore, that place, forever deep in my heart. Still singing that song, Bill. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend ..... Mike.

Valsa George July 28, 2022 at 9:19 PM A lovely series of tanka, deep in passion, sweet in intensity, warm in tone and alluring in effect. Greatly admire it and into my FAVE.... Vladislav Raven July 30, 2022 at 12:02 PM Hi Valsa, thank you for dropping by, the comment and the fave, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. By Love's Shore was taken from a dream I had. My inspiration stood before me and I had to write what I saw. Have a WONDERFUL EVENING. hUGS ALWAYS ..... Mike. XX

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2022 at 3:09 PM Interesting work. This one left me with some questions, therefore, an excellent work. I enjoyed your visit to my page. Sara Vladislav Raven July 30, 2022 at 11:51 AM Hi Sara, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked this piece. We all see something different by Love's Shore. Sorry I didn't drop by yesterday. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Paghunda Zahid July 27, 2022 at 3:51 PM Such a beautiful romantic write... Very well penned.. Blessings Vladislav Raven July 27, 2022 at 4:09 PM Hi Paghunda, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It took me a while to realise that the Tanka form could be used in romantic writes. Hopefully I shall use it again. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2022 at 12:27 PM beautiful and romantic. Such sweet tanka poetry Vladislav Raven July 27, 2022 at 3:03 PM Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It seems that the Tanka form can be used to sing of love. I used to think it couldn't. Wrong again. Once more the heart sings. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Jennifer Proxenos July 27, 2022 at 7:14 AM You do write so awesomely Mike, your soul and heart speak of love, well Mister romantic, loved it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Vladislav Raven July 27, 2022 at 2:53 PM Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is always appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Such days when love is tender and new, or so the dream does say. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Victor Buhagiar July 27, 2022 at 1:25 AM This poem is full of love and romance. Enjoyed reading. Vladislav Raven July 27, 2022 at 2:46 PM Hi Victor, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. By Love's shore I lay my heart. Love displayed as her glory shines. May love ever be the way. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always ..... Mike.

Panagiota Romios July 26, 2022 at 3:46 PM A romantic beauty, Mike! Aphrodite? Perfect! I have written many romantic poems. Sometimes, I look back and they astonish Me! Panagiota xxx Panagiota Romios July 27, 2022 at 3:06 PM Mike, I have not written anything romantic for a long time. But when I dit, yes it was elating. Thank you for responding.I feel like I have known you for years))..You are so real! Panagiota xxx Vladislav Raven July 27, 2022 at 2:24 PM Hi Panagiota, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I think you mean, you have written many wonderful poems on the subject of love. Don't you get such elation when doing so? I always do. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX