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By Love's Shore

You stand by love's shore, 
your golden temple shining. 
A beautiful sun, 
glory ever rising true, 
come now walk into my soul.

You stand by love's shore, 
a breeze now does kiss your flesh. 
Gentle dreams of love, 
softly caressing your soul, 
your smile is sweet perfection.

You stand by love's shore, 
Aphrodite shining bright. 
You are beauty’s rose, 
the song of love in my heart, 
forever smile in my soul.

Copyright © Vladislav Raven | Year Posted 2022

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/30/2022 9:33:00 AM What a romantic tribute "Aphrodite shining bright. You are beauty’s rose, " Wow! Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/30/2022 2:53:00 PM Hi Caren, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I didn't quite know if it would work in the Tanka form but it seems to have turned out quite well. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Bill Baker Date: 7/29/2022 2:05:00 PM Seems you can create beautiful love poetry in many forms, Mike. The Tanka fit well with your message my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/30/2022 2:28:00 PM Hi Bill, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always seem to find my inspiration by love's shore, that place, forever deep in my heart. Still singing that song, Bill. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend ..... Mike.

Valsa George Date: 7/28/2022 9:19:00 PM A lovely series of tanka, deep in passion, sweet in intensity, warm in tone and alluring in effect. Greatly admire it and into my FAVE.... Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/30/2022 12:02:00 PM Hi Valsa, thank you for dropping by, the comment and the fave, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. By Love's Shore was taken from a dream I had. My inspiration stood before me and I had to write what I saw. Have a WONDERFUL EVENING. hUGS ALWAYS ..... Mike. XX

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/28/2022 3:09:00 PM Interesting work. This one left me with some questions, therefore, an excellent work. I enjoyed your visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/30/2022 11:51:00 AM Hi Sara, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked this piece. We all see something different by Love's Shore. Sorry I didn't drop by yesterday. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Paghunda Zahid Date: 7/27/2022 3:51:00 PM Such a beautiful romantic write... Very well penned.. Blessings Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/27/2022 4:09:00 PM Hi Paghunda, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It took me a while to realise that the Tanka form could be used in romantic writes. Hopefully I shall use it again. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/27/2022 12:27:00 PM beautiful and romantic. Such sweet tanka poetry Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/27/2022 3:03:00 PM Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It seems that the Tanka form can be used to sing of love. I used to think it couldn't. Wrong again. Once more the heart sings. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 7/27/2022 7:14:00 AM You do write so awesomely Mike, your soul and heart speak of love, well Mister romantic, loved it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/27/2022 2:53:00 PM Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is always appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Such days when love is tender and new, or so the dream does say. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/27/2022 1:25:00 AM This poem is full of love and romance. Enjoyed reading. Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/27/2022 2:46:00 PM Hi Victor, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. By Love's shore I lay my heart. Love displayed as her glory shines. May love ever be the way. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always ..... Mike.

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/26/2022 3:46:00 PM A romantic beauty, Mike! Aphrodite? Perfect! I have written many romantic poems. Sometimes, I look back and they astonish Me! Panagiota xxx Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 7/27/2022 3:06:00 PM Mike, I have not written anything romantic for a long time. But when I dit, yes it was elating. Thank you for responding.I feel like I have known you for years))..You are so real! Panagiota xxx Vladislav Raven Date: 7/27/2022 2:24:00 PM Hi Panagiota, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I think you mean, you have written many wonderful poems on the subject of love. Don't you get such elation when doing so? I always do. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX