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A colony nests inside my soul where the nectar of pity was hoarded For all you, the urge to soar is unabated Hence, we may widen this horizon Truth can form hallucinations Still, can goals reflect reality? maybe not?! Enter inside the nest as a frogman vulgarity rules the roost you crave her gentle embrace like breath, she sheaths you are lured and compelled follow up on requests at your peril accepting you to the hive our place is ideal for you Improvement? or excellence? however, we do not practice this here wear your uniform and stay in line shut off your mind and act as taught you will be keen soar solo if you must we will sever your wings early creative endeavors I have gathered things for many years yellow sunshine over grassy slopes vividly sketched wildflowers exactly as intended the swarm of delight rarely stopped by what lies outside the white picket gate given the presence of shadows the fence moved further away until all my brightness occurred.
Written: October 23, 2022

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Date: 10/24/2022 5:46:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your internal thoughts and aspirations my friend.
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Date: 10/24/2022 3:37:00 AM
Your imagery is always at its best.
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Date: 10/23/2022 8:02:00 PM
Wonderful word pictures, yet I keep coming back to the "gathered things for many years" because it is like that, these sudden unrelated images that flash across my mind. I live in hope of the brightness! Elizabeth
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