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Buzz Off - Bawdy Limerick

At picnics Sue's legs are akimbo No panties, but Sue ain't no bimbo It keeps pesky flies Landing on our pies Our days out are never in limbo! Your best New Limerick Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 02/03/20

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Jean Bush

Date: 2/25/2020 1:11:00 PM

This is so great. I'll have to give up pies for now. Hahaha!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2020 12:43:00 PM

thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/19/2020 7:43:00 PM

Did Sue work at Greggs the Bakers Jan. Lol

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:16:00 PM

lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/12/2020 1:23:00 PM

Absolutely hilarious! Congrats on your win!!:)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:16:00 PM

thanks Krish:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/11/2020 4:07:00 PM

Lol! Jan, What a bawdy and fun write! Congratulations on your fine win. Have a good day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:16:00 PM

thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2020 3:43:00 PM

oh my, bawdy indeed, dear jan. Congratulations!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:17:00 PM

thanks Andrea I do try and write bawdy in the title so folk can decide if they want to read it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/10/2020 6:40:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:19:00 PM

thanks so much Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 2/10/2020 4:43:00 PM

LOL...Great limerick, Jan. Congrats on your 2nd place win...hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:19:00 PM

thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/10/2020 2:28:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your podium placement with your funny bawdy limerick! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:20:00 PM

thanks so much for inspiring my muse to come out to play - I love your limerick contests:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2020 1:34:00 PM

Congrats on you big win! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:22:00 PM

thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

Date: 2/10/2020 1:27:00 PM

Hahaha... this certainly made me chuckle Jan. With many congrats on your podium win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:22:00 PM

thanks Ann:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt

Date: 2/10/2020 12:53:00 PM

Jan, I will never hear the word 'akimbo' the same again. Hilarious limerick... congrats on your bawdy/body humor! Hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:23:00 PM

thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/10/2020 11:27:00 AM

Should've known you be at the top Jan. Your limericks are always funny. Congratulations:)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:23:00 PM

thanks DT:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/10/2020 11:18:00 AM

On my! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Jan! Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:24:00 PM

thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 2/10/2020 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:25:00 PM

thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 2/9/2020 10:34:00 PM

Clearly, Jan, Sue was as creative as you. You spread laughter with virtually every key stroke. Awesome. Hugs, Paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:25:00 PM

thanks my sweet friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/6/2020 2:47:00 PM

Very cute and I love the "bimbo" rhymes. Your limericks are always so creative, Jan. Best wishes in Tania's contest with this gem! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:26:00 PM

thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/5/2020 6:16:00 PM

Crikey Jan … what about the flies on a man's pants? Catch you soon Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:26:00 PM

Lol thanks Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 2/5/2020 2:25:00 PM

LOL, hilarious, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:31:00 PM

thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/5/2020 12:01:00 PM

Oh, that's a good one Jan. Enjoyed.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2020 2:31:00 PM

thanks ML:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/4/2020 4:34:00 PM

Oh, my. Lovely pie... Hope Tania doesn't die --- of laughter! Great contest entry, Jan! You done did it with this one! :) Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2020 10:43:00 AM

I hope she likes it... it is rather bawdy but limericks are designed for it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/4/2020 3:55:00 PM

A bottle of wine with Sue sounds like a perfect picnic, as I come equipped with a fly swatter! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 2/5/2020 10:42:00 AM

Ha ha ha rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Verlecia Fields

Date: 2/4/2020 5:38:00 AM

you knocked it to the point - a real TKO

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2020 5:58:00 AM

Thanks verlecia:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/4/2020 2:50:00 AM

wops love it, wish i was a fly.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2020 3:34:00 AM

Ha haha comment of the week award to you harry:-) Hugs Jan xx

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/3/2020 10:13:00 PM

Jan, You funny, witty one. Enjoyed this Limerick's pies. -Richard

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2020 3:33:00 AM

Thanks richard, i hope tania finds this one amusing, not everyone appreciates my humour at times but jjudging by the comments it seems to have gone down well lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/3/2020 8:31:00 PM

Lol this was comical. A form I never tried but you excel at. Enjoyed :) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 2/4/2020 3:31:00 AM

I adore writing the form lol:-) Hugs Jan xx