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Buying a Coat For Love

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She was like a big doll, he thought, As he watched her standing stoically So prominent in the window display. A window shopper looked in. So attractive, he thought. Suddenly all reminiscent ideas fled, As she had disappeared from view. He walked towards the window display. There was the dummy wearing a coat With a large mirror behind it. Not a coat of fashion, though around the neck It had some expensive fur, a mink no doubt. It was not beyond his means really. He mused whether he would dare offer it to her. But he hardly knew her and was not rich really, Just a poor latrine attendant with no schooling. Dreams! He was a fool for out of the shop She came wearing the coat and she was not alone. A hunk of a man strode confidently with her. He looked back at the window now without the coat. Only the mirror remained. His face leered back at him. Was his face that ugly that he resembled a mink? Ah well, even minks have a loving mate!

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