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Buying a Coat For Love

She was like a big doll, he thought,
As he watched her standing stoically
So prominent in the window display.

A window shopper looked in.  So attractive, he thought.
Suddenly all reminiscent ideas fled,
As she had disappeared from view.

He walked towards the window display.
There was the dummy wearing a coat 
With a large mirror behind it.

Not a coat of fashion, though around the neck
It had some expensive fur, a mink no doubt.
It was not beyond his means really.

He mused whether he would dare offer it to her.
But he hardly knew her and was not rich really,
Just a poor latrine attendant with no schooling.

Dreams!  He was a fool for out of the shop
She came wearing the coat and she was not alone.
A hunk of a man strode confidently with her.

He looked back at the window now without the coat.
Only the mirror remained.  His face leered back at him.
Was his face that ugly that he resembled a mink?
Ah well, even minks have a loving mate!
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 3:52 AM
Great ending as his own reflection turns on him. I enjoyed the write! Thank you for your patience as I attempt to read more. One more week of concentrated time with two grands. Since they live away from here I must give them all the love I can! <3 Kim
Buhagiar Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 3:59 AM
You are doing the right thing. You are very kind. Blessings and hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 3:52 AM
Great ending as his own reflection turns on him. I enjoyed the write! Thank you for your patience as I attempt to read more. One more week of concentrated time with two grands. Since they live away from here I must give them all the love I can! <3 Kim
Skelly Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 7:05 AM
This is rather poignant although the ending suggests he will find his love...Delice
Nicole Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 8:42 PM
It just wasn't meant to be. When the time is right, love will find him. This is filled with so many emotions. Hugs, Brandy
Ball Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Aw! He wanted to do something nice for an attractive lady and found out he was better off leaving her alone. I think offering a stranger a coat is a bit too forward. Maybe a cup of coffee. ;) The coat could come later. Nice one Victor. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:16 AM
A disappointing conclusion for the poor guy! But there is someone for everyone. You just need to shop around. A captivating poem, Victor. Hugs.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 10:26 AM
To dream the impossible dream, the girl and the coat were out of reach it seems. A lovely enjoyable read Victor… Belle
Theraven Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Victor, You've written a beauty in this poem. The things valued in the world, hoped and wished for. Never seems to end well for the Mink. -Richard
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 7:23 AM
A great narration, Victor. He will find his perfect mate when the time is right. The picture is awesome too! Thanks for visiting my page. BW ~ Mala
Andresen Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 6:27 AM
- His wallet was not big enough for her ...a mink has a very sweet face :) - Great written, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 5:57 AM
There is a coat for every love--may be next time. I hear the message your words convey. Well done, as always, Victor.
Daniel Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Ah! Those just-beyond-our-reach dreams! You describe it well, he will find his love in God's time:)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 5:28 AM
I dunno, minks are kinda cute, they would eat pigeons wouldn’t they? ;), My new dog really wants to eat my pigeons… they just laugh at him. I hope you are well dear poet, sending hugs! xomo
Poet Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 5:24 AM
It is often the case that what we want is beyond our reach, but that we can only hope for. But I’m sure Victor you are so handsome in the eyes of those who love you. Best wishes and kindest Regards.
Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 3:47 AM
Those store mirrors tell it all. LOL.. I am sure you are handsome in someone's eyes and it is alright to dream of a time when you will find the right person. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Cunningham Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 12:57 AM
Sometimes things we desire are just too far out to reach, but we can but dream. Tom
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