Butterfly Kisses

To touch someone’s eyelashes with your own up close to their face, now isn’t that silly? I can just hear all the virile men groan. . . Butterfly kisses with one’s date? Really? To tell you the truth, I’d not even heard of butterfly kisses until one fine day, and I might even have found it absurd had someone most special not kissed me that way! But there was a boy one night that I chose to go on a date with - a flirtatious tease. He said, “Let’s rub noses and be Eskimos” and playfully put my young self at ease. And then he said, “Kiss me like a butterfly.” I giggled when he drew his face close to mine. Both our lashes were long, and on our first try our lashes were kissing; was it divine? I won’t lie and tell you it was complete bliss, but soon in my stomach there strongly fluttered new butterflies from our first full-mouth kiss, and I sighed with every sweet word he uttered. He said, “Close your eyes” and then kissed both of my eyelids so tenderly how could I know if it were anything other than love and, madly, I wished he never would go. His eyes were wide open; I mirrored the touch of his hands like butterflies, wanting to trace my every feature. Those eyes said so much as my hands caressed his sweet beautiful face! His mouth on my neck, his breath at my ear, his lips on my lips; I’d now tasted bliss! What a boy from Quebec had taught me was clear: Romance can take flight from a butterfly kiss. For Gail Angel Doyle's Butterfly Kisses Poetry Contest
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Watson Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 4:58 PM
I love butterfly kissing but I love kisses that give us butterflies even more and that first ever kiss Still rates as a real butterfly moment.
Rhinem Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 2:21 PM
† Tis Something About A Soft As Tender, Brushing Kiss, 'Pon Tingling, Silken Skin, Sweet Beautiful Andrea ˜ A Prelude Unto Her Passion Which Shall Surely Birth, Desires Touch In Flames ˜ Smile, Funny How One Tiny Butterfly Kiss Can Ignite Her Forest And Whom Can Save Such Beauty From Yes, A Lash In Love ? You, Are An Amazing Poetess *:* Set For Faves (* MERRY CHRISTMAS ˜ Love John
Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Unabashedly romantic! Wonderful cadence and fine abab rhyming. You are one talented lady... Best wishes, Keith
Martin Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 9:45 PM
What an adorable poem! It's very sweet and fun to read. Thanks for the share.
A  Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 12:05 AM
it's a beautiful butterfly poem <3 <3 love*SKAT
Maverick Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations my friend..' great winning placement from you, Joe..'
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Andrea I do remember reading this one before, and knew it had to place it's a winner. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Duncan Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 5:01 PM
congrats on this win ;}
Undertaker Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 9:03 AM
congratulations on your win . very romantic. great.
A   Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Andrea,, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "buttefly kiss" contest by Gail. Take Care... xox~ LINDA
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 5:44 PM
Very romantic and congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
May Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 2:23 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea
Nimley Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 9:07 AM
Wow ! such a romantic poem. very powerful to soften and capture a heart that is waiting for love to breath
Manassian Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 10:13 AM
OH DEAR OH DEAR OH DEAR OH DEAR!!!!! ANDREA!!!!! SUPERB!!!! Ok...ok...I must calm down! Seriously though....this was just a flight of fancy! AWESOME! :) What an awesome take. :) Hugs!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 6:22 PM
Exceptional!!! Beautifully written with a softly flowing cadence and super rhyming,,, enjambment in abundance too. Butterfly kisses and butterflies in my stomach? I can still remember..... Good luck in the contest, although I'm sure you won't need it, 'cos this is a sure fire winner!!! Best wishes, Keith
Maverick Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 11:47 PM
Enjoyed this original one from you Andrea, I hope it gets a high placement..'
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 11:45 AM
what a romantic write, my friend - a big winner here
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 6:57 AM
WoW! Fav!!
Hunter Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 6:40 AM
I meant to ask you...have you had any problems entering contests? There are several I want to enter right now(including yours) but I can't. I just get a blank screen when I click on 'enter contest'. Can't scroll down or nothin'.
Hunter Avatar
June 11, 2013 at 6:37 AM
I first saw butterfly kisses on an episode of Spongebob...hahaha...not nearly as romantic as this. Im trying to picture myself giving a butterfly kiss but having a hard time....;) This reads like a winner.
Seal Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Ahhhh yes, butterfly kisses, soooo tender and sweet. Another work of art from you Petal. ps, left you a reply to your Obsevation poem question. Take care, Richad
Johnson Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Such reminicing about playing kissing.
Ober Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 8:06 AM
SO sweet!! I especially loved mention of Quebec, since that's so close by for me ;) Also, thank you so much for your comment on my Footles. They are so much fun to write! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 4:21 PM
This is so sweet and Romantic. Well done again!
Williams Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Andrea I have missed your poetry, this is a very sensual write and it creates a wonderful image, am only here for a while but I had to stop by your work...David
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