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Butterfly Flits, Sweet Nectar Seeks

"Don't deprive yourself of soaking the simplest things in life of what is around you, you will miss the beauty of what God did create that makes this universe." Quote by _ poet A butterfly flits, sweet nectar seeks, beneath the sun's outstretched golden rays. Among the rich laden ambrosia, a zephyr breath blows, sweet aroma. A butterfly flits in its shadow, lithe movement in wet meadow garden. Beauty and waltz grace sweet nectar seeks, among laden ambrosia peaks. A butterfly flits where zephyr braid, mutely flit slowly through pinnate leaves. 12/23/2021 ''B'' Forms, 10 Plus Lines Poetry Contest butterfly Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 10:52 AM
Eve, congratulations on your First Place win in my B Forms contest with this beautiful poem ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 7:54 AM
Lovely imagery! Congratulations, Eve!
Alex Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 8:04 PM
Characteristics of butterflies, especially their habit of swiftness and light-like movements are beautifully portrayed. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 5:26 PM
Back with Congratulations on your outstanding and well-deserved win, Eve. You've written an exquisite poem that is full of wonderful concept metaphors.
Peck Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 8:33 AM
I love this, Eve~beautiful and informative. Good luck.
Poet Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Eve, I enormously enjoy your exceptional personality. The poetess that you are is extremely charming. Bless you, for your kind words and poems, as well as for your lovely comments on my page. Happy holidays,
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 25, 2021 at 8:57 AM
I have always considered butterflies to be a good omen. This is a beautiful entry for the contest Eve. I hope your Christmas is Merry. Blessings xxoo
Leffanta Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 1:25 AM
Beautifully done. I enjoyed so... Merry Christmas Eve and God bless you, Love, Gina
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December 23, 2021 at 11:00 PM
I am not an expert on blank verse. Taking the poem as a description of a butterfly, thus is indeed perfectly written. Best for a win.
Seeker Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 9:38 PM
Wow! Top of the charts!
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