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Butterfly Eyes

If you could view her As i do You would see My love so true This farm girl, my beauty At harvest time My heart sings notes In loving rhyme In her summer dress Against the golds She looks radiant I long to hold She captures the scene Beneath the pale blue skies This farm girl, my beauty With her butterfly eyes http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-8.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/21/2010 7:15:00 AM
Wow, butterfly eyes, captured her beauty in those two words with this one.. Romantic write James :) Wilma
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Date: 3/19/2010 3:54:00 AM
There are so many lovely people in the world. Many brighten our days from a distance without ever knowing. I find this to be quite a lovely poem. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/2/2010 4:57:00 PM
Those butterfly eyes will do it every time James and u have rhymed this little romantic poem so nicely.. enjoyed the flow..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:03:00 PM
Quite a Wordsworthian way to describe a highland beauty
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:31:00 PM
Very passionate and romantic write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:25:00 PM
...Just to be clear...the meadow and woodland smells, not the animals!! lol
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:23:00 PM
All i want to do is return to my home country Wales and breath in the smells of the farm i lived on! You instantly returned my teenage memories! Another amazing poem James. You never stop amazing me.
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Date: 3/1/2010 1:46:00 PM
What a lovely image of this girl you paint with your creative pen, James. You are blessed with a talent for writing beautiful, romantic poetry. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/1/2010 12:50:00 PM
Very good.I love it.I haven't been on the computer much.I did post a new poem for the couplet faith contest.Hope all is well.
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Date: 3/1/2010 12:33:00 PM
Butterfly eyes..lovely expression,different and nice.. A farm girl is always so beautiful..living in the countryside..licking the sun,fresh air..She must be a beauty indeed..lovely poem..Charma
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