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Butterfly Beauty

Brilliant blue butterflies 
dance daintily
on beautiful Buddleia bushes
Fluttering flirtatiously
in gorgeous gardens
nibbling nectar 
from fragrant flowers
as summer sun shines


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Writing challenge October butterfly poetry contest

10/1/19

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James Peranteau Date: 1/13/2024 1:55:00 PM Superb "Alliteration" dear poet! Clearly, you are; gifted, sayz me.. likewise, with pluperfect through your writes i so see; thus do the many... Thrilled tuh learn ya... Much love, me ') Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/10/2019 3:22:00 PM Beautiful imagery and striking alliteration combine to make this poem a worthy winner, Jan. Congratulations on your high-flying win! Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 10/8/2019 7:20:00 PM Jan congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem! Login to Reply

Gary Smith Date: 10/6/2019 4:31:00 PM Great imagery here Jan, congrats. :) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/6/2019 11:38:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Bobby May Date: 10/6/2019 4:47:00 AM Another 1st place 3 in a row WOW !! Login to Reply

Ann Gilmour Date: 10/6/2019 1:58:00 AM Such glorious imagery Jan with this fabulous write - fluttering flirtatiously - wow l love that. Many congrats dear friend on your 1st place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 10/4/2019 3:49:00 PM This is an enchanted garden of butterflies, Jan, gracefully penned! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/2/2019 1:17:00 PM Excellent use of alliteration to create the sight of butterflies. They are among nature's most beautiful creations and your description is spot on! Best wishes for success in Dear Heart's contest, Jan! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply

Ts Poetry Date: 10/2/2019 11:25:00 AM Daintily delightful delivering depth Wonderful Jan Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/2/2019 9:25:00 AM Beautiful... As your heart. Bless you with love and prayers Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 10/2/2019 9:16:00 AM Superbly rendered my Isle of Man girl...sure to place high Jan...have a great day my friend...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 10/2/2019 6:40:00 AM Hi Jan, You painted such a lovely scene with words. I really enjoyed what I saw. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/1/2019 9:56:00 PM Breathtakingly bright and beautiful, Jan!! Alluring alliteration! Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 10/1/2019 9:16:00 PM Very nice Jan :) Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/1/2019 6:50:00 PM ha! wow, you've really nailed the alliteration on this one, jan! thoroughly enjoyable! Login to Reply

Rico Leffanta Date: 10/1/2019 5:38:00 PM Who could wish for a better October day? Well done, Jan! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply

Ronald D Thompson Date: 10/1/2019 4:17:00 PM Your 'Butterfly Beauty' is indeed beautiful. Excellent Jan...Ron xx Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2019 2:59:00 PM - Gorgeous beauty, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 10/1/2019 2:51:00 PM Beautifully mesmerizing Jan. I could see this and it was the most captivating scene. Login to Reply

Bobby May Date: 10/1/2019 2:49:00 PM This is not fair JAN, between you and Sunshine I am up the creek without a paddle, you two make me look so bad. Give me a break stop posting such GREAT poetry! Login to Reply

Debra Squyres Date: 10/1/2019 2:30:00 PM I can see this clearly in my mind. Succulent reading for the eyes... Hi Jan, you probably don't remember me as I have been off the soup for a while. I remembered your name though... and had to read this !! Glad I did. Login to Reply