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Butterfly Beauty

Brilliant blue butterflies dance daintily on beautiful Buddleia bushes Fluttering flirtatiously in gorgeous gardens nibbling nectar from fragrant flowers as summer sun shines Sponsored by Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode Writing challenge October butterfly poetry contest 10/1/19

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James Peranteau

Date: 1/13/2024 1:55:00 PM

Superb "Alliteration" dear poet! Clearly, you are; gifted, sayz me.. likewise, with pluperfect through your writes i so see; thus do the many... Thrilled tuh learn ya... Much love, me ')

Paul Callus

Date: 10/10/2019 3:22:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and striking alliteration combine to make this poem a worthy winner, Jan. Congratulations on your high-flying win! Hugs // paul

Constance La France

Date: 10/8/2019 7:20:00 PM

Jan congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem!

Gary Smith

Date: 10/6/2019 4:31:00 PM

Great imagery here Jan, congrats. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2019 11:38:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/6/2019 4:47:00 AM

Another 1st place 3 in a row WOW !!

Ann Gilmour

Date: 10/6/2019 1:58:00 AM

Such glorious imagery Jan with this fabulous write - fluttering flirtatiously - wow l love that. Many congrats dear friend on your 1st place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/4/2019 3:49:00 PM

This is an enchanted garden of butterflies, Jan, gracefully penned!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/2/2019 1:17:00 PM

Excellent use of alliteration to create the sight of butterflies. They are among nature's most beautiful creations and your description is spot on! Best wishes for success in Dear Heart's contest, Jan! Hugs, Carolyn

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/2/2019 11:25:00 AM

Daintily delightful delivering depth Wonderful Jan

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/2/2019 9:25:00 AM

Beautiful... As your heart. Bless you with love and prayers

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/2/2019 9:16:00 AM

Superbly rendered my Isle of Man girl...sure to place high Jan...have a great day my friend...^WW^ :o)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/2/2019 6:40:00 AM

Hi Jan, You painted such a lovely scene with words. I really enjoyed what I saw. Great job. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/1/2019 9:56:00 PM

Breathtakingly bright and beautiful, Jan!! Alluring alliteration! Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/1/2019 9:16:00 PM

Very nice Jan :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/1/2019 6:50:00 PM

ha! wow, you've really nailed the alliteration on this one, jan! thoroughly enjoyable!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/1/2019 5:38:00 PM

Who could wish for a better October day? Well done, Jan! Aloha! Rico

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 10/1/2019 4:17:00 PM

Your 'Butterfly Beauty' is indeed beautiful. Excellent Jan...Ron xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2019 2:59:00 PM

- Gorgeous beauty, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/1/2019 2:51:00 PM

Beautifully mesmerizing Jan. I could see this and it was the most captivating scene.

Bobby May

Date: 10/1/2019 2:49:00 PM

This is not fair JAN, between you and Sunshine I am up the creek without a paddle, you two make me look so bad. Give me a break stop posting such GREAT poetry!

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/1/2019 2:30:00 PM

I can see this clearly in my mind. Succulent reading for the eyes... Hi Jan, you probably don't remember me as I have been off the soup for a while. I remembered your name though... and had to read this !! Glad I did.