Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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Butterfly Beats

Autumn is golden
mirrored in still glinting lake
Sunbeams through plum trees
Nature's so long symphony
when birds soar in sympathy

Tiffany skies chills
pink robin is still singing
to an empty hall
Last beats of butterfly wings
at time all vividly fall

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Bill Baker June 26, 2023 at 4:58 PM Your Tankas are beautifully descriptive, my friend. You have so much talent to share with us, Evelyn. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Evelyn Judy Buehler June 26, 2023 at 10:08 PM Your kind words are very nice to read, Bill. Thank you so much for your lovely, thoughtful response. My very best wishes, Evelyn

Michael Tor June 26, 2023 at 1:19 PM Lovely pictures your words share such beautiful aspects of Autumn Evelyn...A favorite for me. Such beauty in your words... Evelyn Judy Buehler June 26, 2023 at 3:41 PM You have my heartfelt thanks for the great pleasure of your comment, Michael. :)

Gordon Mcconnell June 26, 2023 at 12:21 PM Nice penning Evelyn, with lovely imagery too. Blessings,Gordon Evelyn Judy Buehler June 26, 2023 at 3:38 PM I appreciate your kind sentiments, Gordon. Blessings

Paula Goldsmith June 25, 2023 at 11:03 AM A lovely write/picture. I love the Autumn time of the year. Have a blessed day/week............ Evelyn Judy Buehler June 25, 2023 at 11:20 AM Thank you very much, Paula. I hope your day and week is blessed, too.

Vijay Pandit June 25, 2023 at 4:50 AM pink robin is still singing to an empty hall Last beats of butterfly wings at time all vividly fall--exquisite imagery of autumn, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 25, 2023 at 11:18 AM Thanks so much for your kind thoughts, Vijay.

Victor Buhagiar June 24, 2023 at 10:55 PM I still love Autumn and you write such lovely verses on the subject, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 25, 2023 at 11:14 AM Thank you, Victor. It's a pleasure to read your comment today.