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17th Oct 2023 (For Joseph May's contest)

Butterfly Affair

Butterflies on our lemon tree, Flirting with its leaves, flitting free, Brushing it here, kissing it there, What a cute romantic affair! A "kaleidoscope" I foresee!
{A group of butterflies is also known as a "kaleidoscope"}
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Date: 12/31/2024 1:22:00 AM
Great imagery, lovely poem, congratulations
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Date: 12/30/2024 7:12:00 PM
As a poem, I thought L1-5 was very sweet... and L6 might have worked better as the title.
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Date: 11/27/2023 2:53:00 AM
Lovely images in my mind's eye as I read this piece - and read it again. Nice one, Joanna.
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:30:00 PM
I knew this would win! Congratulations
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Date: 10/23/2023 11:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Jo :) - hugs
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Date: 10/23/2023 11:17:00 AM
Back with big congratulations in your win. Hugs my friend
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Date: 10/23/2023 9:08:00 AM
Wonderful write Jo, Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/21/2023 10:31:00 PM
superb poem penned; nice to read; beautiful imagery you have created by the Quintilla; congrats for POTD
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Date: 10/21/2023 1:10:00 PM
Belated Congratulations, Joanna, on winning the POTD award! This delightful achievement is as enchanting as the graceful dance of butterflies.
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Date: 10/21/2023 1:55:00 AM
Beautiful selection of words and great choice of the contest.. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 10/20/2023 10:47:00 AM
Belated congratulations on potd, joanna, this is so charming just like butterflies~
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:42:00 PM
This is an absolutely beautiful, magical poem. congratulations on POTD, jo. A superb write, a delight to read. Take care, Shirley
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Date: 10/19/2023 10:34:00 PM
great images....loved it
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Date: 10/19/2023 9:58:00 PM
"Brushing it here, kissing it there, What a cute romantic affair!" Makes me feel young and giddy (again). Congratulations on POTD Joanna!
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Date: 10/19/2023 9:34:00 PM
A lovely lovely concept and poem. I am in awe of the simplicity and beauty. POTD for sure Joanna :)
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Date: 10/19/2023 8:40:00 PM
Jo, this is so sweet and tender! Lovely alliteration! Congratulations on your POTD. Blessings for you and your garden where love blooms!
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Date: 10/19/2023 7:50:00 PM
"Brushing it here, kissing it there." Such a beautiful image to behold. While colors collide, as butterflies group together, it's like watching a painter create a masterpiece. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joanna. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/19/2023 6:12:00 PM
Lovely poem, Joanna. Congratulations on POTD. God bless you.
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Date: 10/19/2023 3:37:00 PM
Hello Jonna Daniel, you have painted your poetry with lovely words. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 10/19/2023 12:47:00 PM
Aww..so lovely, Joanna! A romantic affair, indeed!
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Date: 10/19/2023 12:37:00 PM
So lovely Jo! Congratulations….Debx
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Date: 10/19/2023 12:10:00 PM
what a delightful poem Jo, and I had no idea about a Kaleidoscope of butterflies, that is truly charming. many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/19/2023 11:03:00 AM
A wonderful write full of life and color. Congrats on potd Jo!
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Date: 10/19/2023 9:46:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD. Well deserved.
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Date: 10/19/2023 9:39:00 AM
Dear Joanna, a butterfly affair full of flirting and flitting.. I love it so.. exquisite, delicate and delectable imagery! Congratulations for your poem's wonderful and well-deserved honor of POTD. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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