Laura Leiser Poet Choka

Butterfly

butterfly zig zags
its delicate wings flutter
bright colors float in the breeze

searching for nectar
sweet serum from flower's soul
that flows forth from life to life

butterfly pauses
it's thin wings close and open
then gently it flies away




Written on 7/18/2016
Choka

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Janis Medders Tobechi July 24, 2016 at 5:48 PM Congratulations on your win.....lovely creature....thankd for being in the contest Laura Leiser July 24, 2016 at 6:59 PM Thank you, Janis, for placing me in your great contest! I really appreciated it:)

Sandra Haight July 24, 2016 at 5:35 PM Laura, congratulations on your fine win in the 'Choka' contest! Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser July 24, 2016 at 6:59 PM Thanks, Sandra :)

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2016 at 5:34 PM Big congrats in the contest, Laura. Laura Leiser July 24, 2016 at 6:59 PM Thank you, Andrea :)

Alexis Y. July 24, 2016 at 3:18 PM Hi Laura, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis Laura Leiser July 24, 2016 at 4:59 PM Thank you, Alexis :)

Jan Allison July 24, 2016 at 8:53 AM We both chose the butterfly theme:-) many congrats on your win Laura:-) hugs Jan xx Laura Leiser July 24, 2016 at 1:35 PM Thanks, Jan :)

Paul Callus July 21, 2016 at 5:17 PM Beautiful images of this colorful butterfly, Laura. gl in the contest. Regards // paul Laura Leiser July 22, 2016 at 9:52 PM Thanks, Viv! Hope you're having a good day :) Laura Leiser July 21, 2016 at 5:29 PM Thank you, Paul :)

Viv Wigley July 19, 2016 at 9:55 PM Great subject matter for the style, Laura- it flits along. Lovely. Will do well, I'm sure. Viv x Laura Leiser July 21, 2016 at 5:29 PM Thanks, Viv! Hope you're having a good day :)

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2016 at 3:59 PM very sweet ending for this one. Good luck in the contest. Laura Leiser July 19, 2016 at 5:35 PM Thank you, Andrea! I haven't written in awhile, so I appreciate your kind words:)

Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2016 at 5:51 AM Poetry and butterflies go hand in hand. This poem attests to that Laura. This is lovely! 7 : ) Laura Leiser July 19, 2016 at 5:33 PM Thanks, Connie! I haven't written in awhile...glad you liked it :)