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April. 9. 2025
Finish My Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Mystic Rose Rose
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As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew anointed with a gentle rain amidst sun showers she appears as if on cue Lifting her wings she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue flight of fancy fanning fast, fabulous marvel, she is beauty true on true Look at her fairy wings marked and checkered with dark veins And the frilled edges of its wings spotted with polka white stains. With every swing and every dive in the air, this marvel does amaze With its mesmerizing dance, a wondrous sight inviting us to gaze. The blue butterfly merges well with the azure sky as it ascends higher. As a splash of cobalt, again it comes down, landing on another flower. Its gentle spirit inspires us to soar high, fly and flutter on wings of joy Though its life is short, with the wind under its wings, it is out to enjoy!

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Date: 4/22/2025 7:34:00 AM
Soft and beautiful Valsa. An engaging flight. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/17/2025 12:41:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations, dear Valsa, on your win in this poetry contest with a lovely poem, as graceful as the flight of the butterfly in the air. Wish you a pleasant day, filled with the blessings of light.
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Date: 4/16/2025 6:11:00 PM
Thankyou for finishing my poem dear poets. It was a pleasure reading your poem. A big congrats to all my ten winners. I'm proud of all of you !
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Date: 4/9/2025 3:16:00 AM
delicious poem, butterflies are remarkable, your poem look like a colored painting , great poetry dear poet
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Date: 4/9/2025 3:06:00 AM
Dear Valsa this is simply enchanting — your words capture the grace and magic of the butterfly so beautifully. I love how you’ve blended nature’s elegance with a sense of inspiration and joy. A true celebration of life's fleeting yet wondrous moments! All the best in the contest...Hugs
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Date: 4/9/2025 12:39:00 AM
Awn this is truly beautiful and magical sweet valsa! Truly! I absolutely love the way youv ended the poem too and how well your words go with prompt lines, i especially love "The blue butterfly merges well with the azure sky as it ascends higher." Your use of colors and how descriptive it is, made me see through your words, a beautiful butterfly fluttering away freely! "Though its life is short, with the wind under its wings, it is out to enjoy! " so true! And so inspiring too for some reason, reminds me to enjoy, and live it up while i can too! Pleasure reading your poem today! A FAV this is for me! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/9/2025 12:25:00 AM
Wow! I love the vivid language and flow of this beautiful poem! You did a great job Valsa and will do well I’m sure in the contest!
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Date: 4/9/2025 12:17:00 AM
Beautiful to see in summertime Valsa, you rose well to the challenge, good luck in the contest. Tom
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