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September.9.2023

Pleiades Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Joseph May

Butterfly, gem of grace Beauty's churned quintessence Blend of rainbow colors Bouncing on filmy wings Blooms beckon their buddy Brief, but blissful, its life!

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/12/2023 5:11:00 PM

Outstanding entry for the contest, Valsa. Your choice of photo to match with your Pleiades was beautiful, and a great introduction to your poetry. Smiles ~ Blessing! Bill p.s. good luck in the contest!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/12/2023 3:23:00 AM

This is such a beautiful description on butterfly dear Valsa....I Loved it...Hugs...~ Ani

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 9/11/2023 3:59:00 AM

Superb Pleaides, dear Valsa. Your poetry is so smooth and enticing. Best for a win.

Ministryofdreams Daisy Silk

Date: 9/11/2023 1:43:00 AM

You seized the magic and grace of a butterfly. Beautifully penned pleidaes and what a stunning photo.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/9/2023 11:34:00 PM

Valsa what a wonderful piece of poetry. I can feel the disturbance of air as the tiny wings flutter. A creative submission to the contest, best of luck, its delightful.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/9/2023 6:37:00 PM

Superb Pleiades, Valsa! Janice

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/9/2023 12:54:00 PM

What a beautiful Pleaiades poem dear Valsa. Visually delightful and that last line is so very poignant. Simply gorgeous. Loved it! Thank you for sharing and good luck! Many blessings to you.

Stephan McBride

Date: 9/9/2023 8:04:00 AM

Beautiful poem so elegantly and captivating the majestic work of God's creation, such detail crafted on these filmy wings : )

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 6:42:00 AM

I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, dear Valsa,! It is truly enchanting, with the 'H' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present your exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating. BOL with the contest, and have a lovely week-end

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/9/2023 6:29:00 AM

Oh my dear gorgeous poetess, this is such an enchanting and artistic take for the Pleiades contest.. I too have written for the same word, Butterfly, but I think that yours is definitely a spellbinding and very creative one.. How you've described "bouncing on filmy wings", "blends colours of rainbows", "blooms beckon their buddy"Ahh, I truly adore this with all my heart! And that last line "brief, but blissful, its life" That strikes a chord, I think life depends on quality not on how long lived