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September.9.2023
Pleiades Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joseph May

 

Butterfly

Butterfly, gem of grace Beauty's churned quintessence Blend of rainbow colors Bouncing on filmy wings Blooms beckon their buddy Brief, but blissful, its life!
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Baker Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 5:11 PM
Outstanding entry for the contest, Valsa. Your choice of photo to match with your Pleiades was beautiful, and a great introduction to your poetry. Smiles ~ Blessing! Bill p.s. good luck in the contest!
Jayasankar Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:23 AM
This is such a beautiful description on butterfly dear Valsa....I Loved it...Hugs...~ Ani
Buhagiar Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 3:59 AM
Superb Pleaides, dear Valsa. Your poetry is so smooth and enticing. Best for a win.
Daisy Silk Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:43 AM
You seized the magic and grace of a butterfly. Beautifully penned pleidaes and what a stunning photo.
Volumes Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 11:34 PM
Valsa what a wonderful piece of poetry. I can feel the disturbance of air as the tiny wings flutter. A creative submission to the contest, best of luck, its delightful.
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Superb Pleiades, Valsa! Janice
Bowring Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 12:54 PM
What a beautiful Pleaiades poem dear Valsa. Visually delightful and that last line is so very poignant. Simply gorgeous. Loved it! Thank you for sharing and good luck! Many blessings to you.
McBride  Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 8:04 AM
Beautiful poem so elegantly and captivating the majestic work of God's creation, such detail crafted on these filmy wings : )
Poet Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:42 AM
I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, dear Valsa,! It is truly enchanting, with the 'H' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present your exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating. BOL with the contest, and have a lovely week-end
Sharma  Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Oh my dear gorgeous poetess, this is such an enchanting and artistic take for the Pleiades contest.. I too have written for the same word, Butterfly, but I think that yours is definitely a spellbinding and very creative one.. How you've described "bouncing on filmy wings", "blends colours of rainbows", "blooms beckon their buddy"Ahh, I truly adore this with all my heart! And that last line "brief, but blissful, its life" That strikes a chord, I think life depends on quality not on how long lived
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