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Butterfly

cream worm crawls on greens metamorphosis at work... gold butterfly soars sweet blossoms now touched God*'s creative work prospers... butterfly bears fruit
*Genesis 1:1 In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth. February 16, 2023 Edited on February 26 3rd place, "Spring Flower, Bird or Butterfly Haiku x 2" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 2/25/2023.

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Date: 2/27/2023 3:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this faith-based winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2023 8:16:00 PM
A beautiful haiku on the butterfly. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2023 12:45:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Beata :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/25/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away............................
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Date: 2/25/2023 4:04:00 AM
Beata, a wonderful set of haiku's, enjoyed the "metamorphosis" imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 2/17/2023 9:00:00 PM
Great one Beata ! You have beautifully depicted the transformation of a worm into a lovely butterfly ! All the best!
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Date: 2/16/2023 8:20:00 PM
Oh this is so beautiful! :)
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