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Butterfly

His words tell her she's not enough, his love shows her, she likes it rough ~ his touch couldn't come too soon, she is a caterpillar, in his cocoon

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Date: 10/30/2021 8:58:00 AM
Oh my goodness; this has layers and layers of emotion.
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 10/30/2021 11:08:00 AM
Thank you, this one is about love and control.
Date: 10/17/2021 9:17:00 AM
This is a unique write. I like it a lot. Congrats on being a best.
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 10/18/2021 12:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Reading these comments really means the world to me. :-)
Date: 10/5/2021 11:34:00 PM
Good decision not to add to this piece, I sometimes tinker around with what I have written, it never works for me. Great submission...Delice
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 10/6/2021 2:55:00 PM
Thank you. I've learnt with my writing when to stop! Unfortunately I'm Still learning with the wine.
Date: 9/7/2021 4:48:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 9/7/2021 12:09:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your comment. :-)
Date: 9/4/2021 11:44:00 AM
CONGRATS on your win, Joanna. Janice
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 9/4/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thank you. :-)
Date: 9/4/2021 10:55:00 AM
I'd love to read a follow up poem Joanna to see if she decides to break free and fly away. :) Congratulations & Cheers - Gary
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 9/4/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment. :-)
Date: 9/4/2021 9:50:00 AM
ooohhh, I quite like this one!! BIG congrats for your win, Joanna
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Jo Chamberlain
Date: 9/4/2021 11:49:00 AM
Thank you very much. :-) I wasn't sure if it was finished. I've decided not to add to it.
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