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Butterfly

His words tell her she's not enough, his love shows her, she likes it rough ~ his touch couldn't come too soon, she is a caterpillar, in his cocoon
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Krutsinger Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Oh my goodness; this has layers and layers of emotion.
Chamberlain Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Thank you, this one is about love and control.
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:17 AM
This is a unique write. I like it a lot. Congrats on being a best.
Chamberlain Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Reading these comments really means the world to me. :-)
Skelly Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 11:34 PM
Good decision not to add to this piece, I sometimes tinker around with what I have written, it never works for me. Great submission...Delice
Chamberlain Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Thank you. I've learnt with my writing when to stop! Unfortunately I'm Still learning with the wine.
Agustin Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Chamberlain Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 12:09 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your comment. :-)
Canerdy Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 11:44 AM
CONGRATS on your win, Joanna. Janice
Chamberlain Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Thank you. :-)
Radice Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 10:55 AM
I'd love to read a follow up poem Joanna to see if she decides to break free and fly away. :) Congratulations & Cheers - Gary
Chamberlain Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 9:50 AM
ooohhh, I quite like this one!! BIG congrats for your win, Joanna
Chamberlain Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 11:49 AM
Thank you very much. :-) I wasn't sure if it was finished. I've decided not to add to it.
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