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Butterfly

I live on trees I eat green leaves I crawl and crawl and hide From the Beings in unfurled leaves I sing with the wind in silver moonlight And wait and wait till the time is right To enter the Chrysalis and get some sleep To bear two wings and paint them bright I wait and wait and never make a sigh! Then break the cocoon and fly real high I flap and flap and flap my wings Embrace new life and wonders of the sky Fancy a drink from the leaves of a flower? Or a ride on Breeze to a nearby tower? Wait and wait till the time you are ready! Work on your wings and make them steady! °____________________________° Nursery Rhyme Paghunda Zahid

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Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2023 10:12:00 PM

Paghunda, congratulations on your win. Have a Merry Christmas.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/24/2023 7:28:00 AM

Cute Paghunda. Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2023 11:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love It... Have A Very Blessed Christmas..................

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2023 10:54:00 PM

Hello Paula, thanks a lot. And happy Christmas to you too.. Enjoy your holidays. Cheers

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 5/6/2023 9:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering your poem! We truly enjoyed and appreciated your nice format :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 5/23/2023 3:59:00 AM

Thank you BJ...

Emilia James

Date: 7/26/2022 4:01:00 AM

This is so lovely. I love how a caterpillar turns into a beautiful butterfly. Gives a feeling of something magical about that process. Emilia : )

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2023 10:53:00 PM

Thanks a lot

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/17/2022 5:21:00 PM

This is beautiful! I had the privilege of raising monarch butterflies from tiny caterpillars to full butterflies and watched them both make the chrysalis and come out of it. Quite an experience. Thank you for your comments on my poem.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2023 10:53:00 PM

Thanks Gibson. I am glad you liked it.

Valsa George

Date: 1/7/2022 4:25:00 AM

Hi friend, this would be greatly relished by children. The entire life cycle of a butterfly from caterpillar to the final evolution into a butterfly is beautifully described ! Enjoyed.... ! Thanks Paghunda for your kind visit to my page!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2023 10:53:00 PM

Thanks Valsa, means a lot

Eve Roper

Date: 10/14/2021 10:04:00 AM

Hello, Paghunda, I really liked your poem, but I couldn't place it in the contest. You forgot to place Nursery Rhyme at the end of your title and you had your name on it; which can not be allowed by Soup Contest rules. One other mistake "until. Sure loved your verse. Hugs

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/23/2023 10:52:00 PM

It finally got placed in your latest contest Eve... Thank you!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/15/2021 12:12:00 PM

Hi Eve, that's really nice of you. I am glad that you liked these verses. I have actually written it months before your contest. And my bad, I didn't read rules of the contest either. Anyway thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment here. Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:54:00 PM

this is so magical and lovely. GREAT writing.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/9/2021 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/12/2021 5:37:00 PM

Oh, Paghunda, on brightly painted butterfly wings, I was swept up and away into the magical realm of this beautiful and rhythmic poem. An absolutely delightful and wonderfully creative nursery rhyme. Loved it! Your splendid heart and brilliant artistry shines, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/9/2021 10:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan