Butterflies of Snow: Hexsonnetta

Lightly flutter snowflakes
as on the breeze they go,
these butterflies of snow.
Spiderwebs the frost makes
when the pewter day breaks
to snare them as they blow.

This window the webs ring
the porthole in the frost
on which the flecks are tossed
is tatted like the wings
of earwigs in the spring.
The glass becomes embossed

with ornaments of ice 
and blooms of edelweiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 2/18/2018 4:57:00 PM
I can see the pewter sky breaking!..Great visual. Glad I met you. Congrats.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 2/18/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Barbara!
Date: 1/31/2018 12:00:00 PM
I enjoyed this even more on second reading Dale. Congratulations on your second place win with this gem. It is going into my Faves! : )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/31/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Connie!
Date: 1/30/2018 11:57:00 PM
Superbly done, Dale. A well deserved win. Bravo.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/31/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanks you, Line!
Date: 1/30/2018 10:06:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery, silky smooth eloquent, just wonderful Dale. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/31/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen!
Date: 1/30/2018 7:59:00 PM
So beautiful! Fave! Congrats!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/30/2018 8:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim!
Date: 1/22/2018 9:59:00 AM
Gorgeous, write, Dale! I am a "newbie" to poetry, and just beginning to work on, (and learn with competency), the many forms and their details and nuances. You have a mastery of so many, and you are one of my primary resources for style and form. I never wrote a Sonnet until about a week ago, (sadly), and I am beginning to understand why they are so popular (to write) with other poets, and the Hexsonnetta is particularly beautiful - THIS one exquisite! Thanks for letting me "learn" from you!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/22/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thanks, Greg. I am still learning myself and only began studying the various forms six or seven months ago.
Date: 1/21/2018 7:24:00 PM
This is gorgeous and I enjoy seeing the hexsonnetta so well executed by a sonneteer such as yourself. Thanks what you said about my sonnets being down to earth. AT least half of my sonnets are that way. I just love using the sonnet meter to tell a tale or to make an ordinary situation seem just a bit less ordinary.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/21/2018 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I don't think anyone's sonnets are as accessible to readers as yours.
Date: 1/19/2018 10:36:00 PM
Your imagery and rhymes sparkle Dale. Beautifully done.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/20/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Date: 1/19/2018 9:38:00 PM
I really like this Dale. It's very descriptive and puts you in the moment. Very nice!!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/20/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Pat! Good to hear from you!
Date: 1/19/2018 1:36:00 PM
This is brilliant, you do this form so well..
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/19/2018 1:37:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 1/19/2018 1:33:00 PM
You compliment Andrea's form beautifully with your well chosen words Dale. I am sure she will appreciate this as much as I do! Lovely! : )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/19/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thanks, Connie!
Date: 1/19/2018 12:45:00 PM
- A beautiful sonnet, Dale ... with two awesome end lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 1/19/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise!
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