Butterflies In Spring (Footle)

. Blossoming things Gossamer wings

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Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 2:32:00 PM

~~Reading Rainbow Theme Song~~ Butterfly in the sky ** I can go twice as high ** Take a look ** It's in a book ** A Reading Rainbow** I can go anywhere ** Friends to know ** And ways to grow ** A Reading Rainbow** I can be anything ** Take a look ** It's in a book ** A Reading Rainbow ** A Reading Rainbow**

Brian Strand

Date: 4/3/2010 12:15:00 AM

Easter greetings Carrie thank you for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian.Great epigram poem Carrie but you may care to review as a footle has only two syllables per line.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/3/2010 12:08:00 AM

Beautiful, and best of luck in the contest...Raul

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/2/2010 7:08:00 PM

A beautiful word picture Carrie. good luck, this looks a winner to me. cheers Margaret

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2010 6:02:00 PM

A beaty write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2010 9:16:00 AM

OH, so a footie can be more than one or two syllables and two words if you want?? I keep seeing just one word or one syllable per line. This is a beauty, CArrie and I think it should do really well. Yes, the women in the "old days' sure liked to put all their hair up in a bun,didn't they? Luv, Andrea

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/1/2010 8:40:00 PM

Ewwwww I like! Very nicely done my dear

Sean Kelly

Date: 4/1/2010 11:59:00 AM

All the " Ole Footlers " are back in action . Best of luck Carrie . Cool Spot ... For Moth ....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2010 11:55:00 AM

What a wonderful image, Carrie!! Best wishes for success in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn