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So far this year I have seen 21 different types of butterflies in my garden

Butterflies

In summer my garden comes alive
as graceful butterflies make it home.
Peacocks with vivid colours flit
from blossom to blossom

Busily working gathering nectar
pollinating as they go on to next
flower. All so pretty I love them all
visiting my climbing rambling roses.

Red Admirals, Swallow tails and monarchs
adding swathes of brilliant colour
chased by Skippers and Orange tips
as each one vies for one more bloom.

While Gatekeepers and Clouded Yellows
delicately sip from my hibiscus.
A cloud of Fritillary's descend on stocks
and Painted Ladies mock the sweet peas.

A drone of bumble bees sets the tune
for Tortoiseshells to dance to.
Purple Emperors set the scene
as they visit my asters and begonia's.

Ah! sweet summer flowers, all
are kissed by Comma's  and Coppers
bringing my garden to life
with joy as they all busily work

written 08/12/2015
contest Skat's  Butterflies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hobbs Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Makes me want to be there. Well done!
Ebbs Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Smiles, nice, congrats on your win Shadow!
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:44 PM
ty Edward hugs
Onclaud Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 5:20 PM
i missed this contest and your is sooo pretty, shadow.. love the images.. huggs and congrats!
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:43 PM
ty Nette hugs
Kiser Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 3:14 PM
What a lovely, colorful garden picture you have painted with your words. Just beautiful.
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:43 PM
ty ML hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 10:31 PM
Wonderful imagery Shadow, so I loved the unique take on butterflies in ur garden, Congrats on big win!
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:42 PM
ty Dr Upma hugs
Nunez Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 7:46 PM
I've read that a painting of a beautiful garden with flowers in bloom is a dead painting...until you put butterflies. Your garden must be vibrant, Shadow. Congratulations! How are you? I hope you are keeping well. hugs!
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:42 PM
am good ty Kim just busy you? hugs
Sathasivam Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Nice tribute to the beautiful butterflies. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:41 PM
ty Ravi hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 9:28 AM
So glad to see this one on the winners list Shadow.
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:40 PM
ty Rick hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 4:12 PM
so beautifully written,Shadow. BIG congrats. I don't know your placement. I just noticed here that you won. and I am glad for that.
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:39 PM
ty Andrea hugs
Manassian Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:22 PM
What a lovely write, Shadow.....I learned so much about butterflies. I only know the name of the monarch. A breath of fresh air....this poem. Congrats, dear. Hugs
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:39 PM
ty Eileen so nice to see them hugs
A  Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 12:21 AM
SHADOW, Congratulations on your butterfly win. SKAT love
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:38 PM
ty Skat for contest and place hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Hi Shadow, I enjoyed rereading this one.
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:37 PM
ty Rick hugs
Laurie Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 8:44 PM
G'day Shadow... nice tribute to the beautiful and silent workers in our gardens. Having an array is a sign that the health and variety of plants in your garden is something to be admired - thank you Shadow - Lindsay
Hamilton Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 5:36 PM
ty Lindsay hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 9:09 AM
They sound breathtaking!
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 11:54 AM
ty Rick hugs
Onclaud Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 8:19 AM
what a colorful, dainty butterfly personified in a most vivid way, shadow.. i like this.. huggs
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 11:53 AM
ty Nette hugs
Allison Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 6:29 PM
beautiful nature write Shadow your garden seems to be a riot of colour - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 11:52 AM
ty Jan hugs
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