But Not Forgotten

I walked through the mostly, well-manicured cemetery To once again place flowers on my Becky’s grave Being that the day was nice and sunny I walked along a longer path to get to her that day Tucked into a corner plot, near the fence and all alone Was a grave all covered with weeds – you could barely see the stone I am not sure what drove me to it But it just didn’t seem right and looked out of place So I took my gardening tools with me and worked for hours to restore its grace Carved on the head stone of this woman’s grave Were the words, “Gone, But Not Forgotten” The date of death was not so long ago The irony of it all just seemed so rotten As I talked to Becky, I said, “I hope you don’t mind - I gave your flowers away today” “I’ll bring you some more tomorrow” I knew she understood, because that was just her way
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Murray Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Oh, I am so touched by the beauty and grace within the lines of this poem...and your heart. Congratulations on your well deserved win Joe. I love this Hugs and Peace...Anne
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July 22, 2012 at 9:59 PM
Joe, congratulations in Susan's, "forgotten" contest.. have your self a good night. ;-) always~PD
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July 21, 2012 at 9:58 PM
Congrats on your first place win, Joe! You touched my heart with this emotive write. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Ryerson Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Joe...I can identify with your poem as my situation is much the same...My wife and son rest together in the same cemetary. The grave in question is only a few yards away from them with only a faded, sinking sign for a marker...I could not make out the name. I dare not judge because I don't know the circumstances but it is still a very sad situation...I used to visit them often but now only on birthdays and some holidays...just to painful. Once again, my congratulations to you - Tim
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Forgotten" contest Joe. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 11:01 PM
Joe,...this is a poetic masterpiece...every single word you wrote describing this walk and the care u took of this beloved woman's grave! Applause! Enjoyed...gwendolen
Macfarlane Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Congrats Joe! This is so beautiful and touching. Hugs
Sweetheart Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 8:03 PM
congrats Joe on a great first place win for this fine entry luv..
Taylor Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Congrats, Joe. Beautiful, touching piece. Well deserved win, my friend. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
Williams Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Joe just a quick congrats on your win..David
Kearley Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Congrats on the win with this poem that got my eyes all watery Joe... :*) Very heartfelt write...
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Congrats on your win Joe....happy for you. - Well written poem - oxox love Anne-Lise
Guzzi Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Very touching as so many many of your writes are pulling at the heartstrings. Light & Love Congrad's on your win.
Johnson Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 7:58 AM
What a dear, sweet poem Joe. So glad it came in #1. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 7:28 AM
ongrats on your win..this one is heartbreaking and yet uplifting...thanks. BG
Grisetti Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Stunning poem. Congratulations on your win.
Susan Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 6:56 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win in my contest! Love the sentiment here :)
Collins Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:43 AM
Dear Joe - Sad tears fill my eyes on this one. I think it was Becky directed you the long way and I'll bet she knew what you would do. Beautiful. love, Kathy
Bauer Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 4:52 PM
this is lovely - tender and poignant. i like it very much!
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