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Busy Bees- 3cubed Christmas

Joy and smiles Christmas tree, Toy styles, Mom plus dad, Are busy bees, Night is Mad, They're rad elves, Full of glee, With bare shelves! Contest: Have Merry 3-Cubed Christmas Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 12/16/19 Placed 5th in contest Now revised with correct syllable count

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2019 10:30:00 PM

So cute Alexis! Congratulations on your win! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/31/2019 10:48:00 PM

Hi Connie, I’m soooo happy that stopped by. Hau’oli Makahiki Hau! to you too. Now translate lol! Happy New Year to you and your family and friends:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 12/29/2019 2:55:00 PM

Dropping back with my Congrats on your win Alexis..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2019 12:55:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Alexis :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2019 12:14:00 PM

Quite creative, Alexis; pity about the syllable count. Congratulations on your win. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/29/2019 1:15:00 PM

Hi Paul, It's sooooo good to see you. Happy belated Christmas to you and your family. Have Happy New year as well. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 3:17:00 PM

Here is another poem I really liked a lot, but line 3 had only 2 syllables. This was such a cute one with the reference to the parents as elves and the bare shelves. Very creative work, Alexis. Congrats in my contest.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/28/2019 3:31:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I appreciate that I'm on the winners list. I should have checked my syllable count more thoroughly. Have a wonderful New Year:-) Alexis

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/17/2019 8:11:00 PM

I like this one, Alexis. Very creative! Glad you like the Cletus O'Toole writes. Seems like the poor guy just can't do anything right! Stay tuned - more of his misadventures to follow. Merry Christmas to you and your family - Bob

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/16/2019 8:19:00 PM

love this Alexis...always the mad dash for parents to get things done before christmas morn...i remember those days! Hugs :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/16/2019 8:26:00 PM

WoW! Sandra, You my friend got what I attempted to convey. Thank you so much. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/16/2019 7:42:00 PM

Very, very, cute. Love the style, Alexis. Here's to a winner for you in the contest! Season's best, Gershon

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/16/2019 2:58:00 PM

This is such a beautiful ink ornament, Lexi! Hang this bright write on the top of the Christmas tree. It was so enjoyable to read this holiday cheer. Wonderful poetry, my dear friend. Love and more love always.

Chris Green

Date: 12/16/2019 12:34:00 PM

Really cute Alexis. I haven't seen this form before. But now I have. :) Best wishes in the contest my friend.

Joseph May

Date: 12/16/2019 10:25:00 AM

I like the "rad elves" in this lovely Christmas write Alexis, best wishes in the contest