Bust Today, the Only Way

take, take, who’s on the make? and do some
	
people have a vested stake?

now tax is surely a painless way, to right

whole countries  and save the day,

if medals are struck as some time they may

in honour of those who have made the way,

and what will the legends and letters say
 
as Ireland and Greece go down the slide,

and Portugal's on a roller coaster ride, (doctors)

have made provision for this long haul way,

no more to boom! It’s bust, bust, bust, so the interest

pillow is a dead cert must! but have our saviours’ today,

managed to saddle still salvageable 

economy's into a hundred years of H P paydays..?



© Joe Maverick 31-1-2011


for Carolyn Devonshire's (taxing times contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 10:30 PM
stopping by another oldie and just saying a big hello!! Time for me to get off here now. Luv, Andrea
Wesley Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 7:07 PM
What a powerful way to deliver the news Joe; such a mess so many are in and still they don't pull in their horns. Great entry for Carolyn's contest, she will love it as I did!
Mac Donald Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 7:06 PM
A profound write, by my deep and worldly friend! It's hard to say if the taxing times will be the relief funds needed.:( It certainly stirs the minds and hearts of so many, Joe! Congratulations on your win, with this thought provoking write! Best wishes! Love, Mikki
Jones Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 7:54 PM
If you have good health insurance, which you DO have unless you're a lazy bum hippy freak communist islamic terrorist illegal immigrant laid-off hard worker, then the boob (bust, bust, bust) job should be no prob. digya, Joe, Namaste~N
Foulk Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 8:39 PM
this was a very good write, really reading this one, very creative piece. thank you for commenting on Little Blue Eyes, yes it is, i have written about my granddaughter, but mostly about brandon, because i see him more. I told my son to bring her over then i would write more about her also, they both inspire me though.
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April 23, 2011 at 9:42 PM
i see congrats here! Hello Joe.. great poem and entry.. had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.
Brown Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations ! on your win Joe in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Taxing Times". Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 6:49 PM
sad thoughts....hopefully the world will get better.
Duffin Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Hi Joe. Thanks for the visit. Best of luck with this great piece. It should be included in every politicians manifesto. Eamon
Devonshire Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 11:08 AM
Hi Joe, I'm afraid I haven't had much time for reading lately. My best friend's mother is in hospice and is expected to die in the next day or two. I've known her mother well since we were 14 years old. Trying to make some time for the Soup is even a challenge now, but I will provide some feedback as soon as I'm able to finish reading your book. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Perfection in your lines Joe and a great contest entry which should do well in the new contest .. good luck.. wish we did not have to pay those taxes luv...
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Good one that reads like winning material for the contest..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara
Calhoun Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:52 PM
Hi Joe - Congratulations on your WIN in Carolyn's "Tax Time" contest. Best wishes, KC
Fraser Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 11:42 AM
Many congratulations Joe on your win in Carolyn's contest....:)
Mehta Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joe
Freeman Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Joe, congratulations on a worthy poem's place in the top ten. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 11:35 PM
Hi, Joe and congratulations in this taxing contest.It was wonderful seeing your comments today. LUv, Andrea PS you really seem to know alot about other countries' taxes here!
Pettit Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 7:05 PM
No wonder you won in Carolyn's contest with this entry. This has wonderful descriptiveness and rhyming. Congratulations!
Taylor Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 2:33 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Joe. Nice going. Ralph
Devonshire Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Joe, I don't think our economy IS salvageable. Good work! Congratulations on your win. The competition was very strong, so take pride in your accomplishment! Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 1:18 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Joe
Culverhouse Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 6:09 PM
enjoyed reading today....sad thoughts on the economy.
Locksley Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 5:13 PM
I wish our economy was salvageable Joe but I don't think that's possible anymore. What is an H P payday? I enjoyed your entry. Good luck in the contest, Diane
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January 31, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Wow what a read I can't believe it's here again.Thanks for the comment Joe.~Luv~Teresa
Devonshire Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 9:07 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Joe. Love, Carolyn
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