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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 June 24
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A student who's a potential business-minded ask?

 

Business 101: 'art' of trade

evil for evil good for good ~ can there be trades trader for traitor is it wrong to wish ill on others ~ it is not I've heard you've back pains trust standards sides low I err the side of caution er ~ more Brit or Reb Brits says it as er ~ well crossed Doctor Watson air Rebs word of caucean ask me anything and I'll answer true or false ~ tis you must decide I say you speak false nonsense what was the question ~ decide true or false
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George Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 8:45 PM
Lovely one, Hilo. I like the format and structure. Amazing exploration on morality, trust, contemplations and rhetorical questions. Almost got me lost in the woods as I didn't know what I would consider true or false. Sometimes evil for evil. Hahaha. That's what my brain would choose, but my heart, otherwise.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 10:25 PM
Tonye, your indulgence refreshes the nature of adolescents that oblige the flight of passing winks, and the climb of grins that sorts the whimsy affair ... howbeit, inviting insights that this Hawaiian while a parting of its day, Aloha my friend, William
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