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Burnt Offerings

Sharp the need
burning the bitter weed
burnt offerings in
fragments of imagery
feeling the spice sweet 
dreams come
nice as the world swims 
out of view 
the light feeds on the pain
as if on cue feelings curl 
around my spine 
as the monsters crawl
were all is pain 
smoldering lighting 
erupts the vain
the poison seeps
on the nerves optically 
burn the sweet spice 
turn feelings 
harrowing or serene 
burrows deep
my spine sharp 
but nice
burning the bitter weed
sharp is the need

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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