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Burns of Hatred

You put up a price on all the gifted items. I was not ready to pay back in dreams. Wanted to tell you without telling. Lips to lips we talk of a stillborn space which does not crack. Betraying the anger, words feel sick. I was trying to decipher the moist corners of eyes. I will wait till sunset, when I will call for the night and take off my shadows and drop petals one by one and come out in hot sun to receive the burns of hatred. It was not easy. Tulips were in full bloom and my tracks were warm. There were false shades all around the garden. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/11/2009 9:14:00 PM
Congrates on your being featured this week with this wonderful poem ...kind regards Jayne x x
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Date: 9/11/2009 4:45:00 PM
Hi Satish Great job! Love your poetic sentiments. Congrats on your feature write this week! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:38:00 AM
This is a great poem. Nice work
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Date: 9/11/2009 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful poem, such burning sentiment. So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/11/2009 5:33:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry with us. Congrats on your feature write! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/8/2009 7:07:00 PM
Satish - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:29:00 PM
Satish, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Satish. Love, Carol
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