Burning Sands

Blazing sun and burning sands,

laughing squeals of delight.

Glistening waters, crashing waves,

Beautiful partner, what a sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Fraser Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 1:38 PM
Endearing and quite lovely Christopher. The images are so warm, it's wants Summer to be here :)
Bunton Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Thank You!
Coster Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 5:35 PM
A great write, short and sweet. I enjoyed reading it. Would be cute to put it on stock paper with a photo behind it and frame it.
Bunton Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Thank You!
Falotico Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 4:23 PM
This should be in a card or written on the sands of that beach... excellent work my friend... Michael
Bunton Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:34 AM
Thank You!!
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