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Burlap and Satin He labors in the field 'neath blazing sun below a sky of blue with clouds of white; his wagon and his farming tools at hand. With burlap hat and ragged shirt undone, from dawn to dusk he works the blessed land; brings life to fertile soil with brawn and might. His heart is happy in the time he spends to make a good life for his new-found bride: to be together, come the sun or rain. To share in living on the crops he tends, and bear the long hot days, sore muscles, pain his work demands in order to provide. And now he has an angel by his side attending him throughout his labored days. Her hours are long with indoor duties too. And in the evening, both at rest, abide the coming of the next day to renew their modest joys of life in simple ways. So often through the day, she is right there beside a window, safe indoors to see, with cat against her satiny-sleeved arm, her dear strong man, if he is taking care to work the field without her fear of harm. His angel in disguise…dear wife is she. February 12, 2015 Burlap and Satin ~2nd Place~ Premiere Contest: Burlap and Satin Sponsor: Anthony Slausen Judged: 03/30/2018 ~1st Place~ Contest: Angels Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Judged: 01/01/2016 ~1st Place~ Contest: An Angel in Disguise Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst Judged: 03/20/2015 Iambic Pentameter, Rhyme Scheme: a-b-c-a-c-b

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Date: 4/3/2018 10:28:00 AM
Congrats on your excellent winning work. I enjoyed reading your thoughts. Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/3/2018 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your congrats and very positive comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/31/2018 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! A great topic with story well told.
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/31/2018 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Maybe (sometimes) we romanticise the joy of more simple labour. But, I think, more often than not we might not appreciate simplicity and being grounded...Many wishes to you, Kai
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/31/2018 4:34:00 PM
Yes, Kai, this poet's heart loves to romanticise the simple joys of life, and this shows throughout many of poems. Even though I have always lived a very comfortable life, I mostly enjoy the simple things. Thank you for reading my poem and for your nice congrats! Sandra :)
Date: 3/30/2018 9:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you once again, Eve, for your wonderful visits and wonderful comments. I hope your Easter is blessed and enjoyed! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/30/2018 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your nice win with this wonderful burlap and Satin ....
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:26:00 PM
Probir, thank you so much for your positive comment and congratulations. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 3/30/2018 8:13:00 PM
absolutely beautifully told! Congrats!
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kitty, for visiting my poem and for your uplifting comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 3/30/2018 7:46:00 PM
Excellent, Sandra! You've painted us a sweet picture in this WINNING poem! Janice
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. I much appreciate your positive and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/30/2018 7:24:00 PM
Congrats, Sandra, on your wonderful top win. Beautifully done.
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank you, Line, for your visit and uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/30/2018 5:35:00 PM
What a wonderful story teller you are Sandra! The illustration only enhances your poem, but the picture your words paint touches the heart! Loved it!
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Date: 3/31/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank you, Carrie, for your very supportive and complimentary comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/6/2016 12:45:00 AM
Nice win... LINDA
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/7/2016 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/3/2016 11:28:00 PM
SANDRA, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem and painting Sandra, congratulations on your placement. From Jean
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Date: 1/2/2016 4:58:00 PM
Sandra, just beautiful..you are very special and have a wonderful gift...Be blessed *smiles*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/3/2016 9:59:00 AM
Hi Laura, I am humbled and thank you so much for your kind words, Thank you.. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/1/2016 11:56:00 PM
Poem & painting- A7! Congrats on your placement, Sandra!
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Date: 1/2/2016 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, Balveen for your support and congrats. I wish you and yours a healthy and happy new year. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/1/2016 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/2/2016 6:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michael. And, I wish you and yours a healthy and happy new year. Sandra
Date: 1/1/2016 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/2/2016 6:27:00 AM
Thank you again for sponsoring another great contest, Nayda, and for my nice placement. Happy New Year to you and yours. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/21/2015 8:21:00 AM
Well done, congratulations.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2015 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. I appreciate your stopping by with your congrats. Sandra
Date: 3/20/2015 10:58:00 PM
I love the way you did your entry. So glad to finally see this one and congrats for your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2015 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I really appreciate your nice comment and congratulations. There were so many different takes on this visual! Thanks again for stopping by. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/20/2015 7:57:00 PM
Well-done piece for the angel in disguise prompt. Congratulations on your interpretation of the picture; I'd place in in the early 1900d's.
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Date: 3/23/2015 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Reason. So nice of your to stop by with your nice comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/20/2015 6:05:00 PM
Sandra, back again to congratulate you on your fantastic win. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2015 7:54:00 PM
Hi Eve, thank you for your nice comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/20/2015 3:53:00 PM
Aah a beautiful one indeed. Congrats on your win :) love this
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Date: 3/20/2015 4:04:00 PM
Sasha, so nice of your to stop by with your nice comment and congratulations. I really appreciate it. Sandra
Date: 3/20/2015 2:13:00 PM
SANDRA, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
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Date: 3/20/2015 3:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. I appreciate your stopping by. Sandra
Date: 3/20/2015 2:03:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/20/2015 3:36:00 PM
Thank yo so much, PD. So nice of your to stop by. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/20/2015 1:02:00 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you on your win Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/20/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. I always appreciate your comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/19/2015 10:39:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, love the imagery and the subject. Good luck in the contest 7 blessings dear friend eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/22/2015 3:02:00 PM
Eve, I so much appreciate you nice comment and support, as well as best wishes for the contest. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
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