Notes About The Poem

Burlap and Satin


Burlap and Satin


He labors in the field 'neath blazing sun
   below a sky of blue with clouds of white;
      his wagon and his farming tools at hand.
         With burlap hat and ragged shirt undone,
from dawn to dusk he works the blessed land;
brings life to fertile soil with brawn and might.

His heart is happy in the time he spends
   to make a good life for his new-found bride:
      to be together, come the sun or rain.
         To share in living on the crops he tends,
and bear the long hot days, sore muscles, pain
his work demands in order to provide.

And now he has an angel by his side
   attending him throughout his labored days.
      Her hours are long with indoor duties too.
         And in the evening, both at rest, abide
the coming of the next day to renew
their modest joys of life in simple ways.

So often through the day, she is right there
   beside a window, safe indoors to see,
      with cat against her satiny-sleeved arm,
         her dear strong man, if he is taking care
to work the field without her fear of harm.
His angel in disguise…dear wife is she.


February 12, 2015

Burlap and Satin
~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: Burlap and Satin
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen
Judged: 03/30/2018

~1st Place~
Contest: Angels
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Judged: 01/01/2016

~1st Place~
Contest: An Angel in Disguise 
Sponsor: Isaiah Zerbst
Judged: 03/20/2015


Iambic Pentameter, Rhyme Scheme: a-b-c-a-c-b
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Congrats on your excellent winning work. I enjoyed reading your thoughts. Sara
Haight Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for your congrats and very positive comments! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations on your win! A great topic with story well told.
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Thank you very much, Susan! I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra
Neumann Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your win. Maybe (sometimes) we romanticise the joy of more simple labour. But, I think, more often than not we might not appreciate simplicity and being grounded...Many wishes to you, Kai
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:34 PM
Yes, Kai, this poet's heart loves to romanticise the simple joys of life, and this shows throughout many of poems. Even though I have always lived a very comfortable life, I mostly enjoy the simple things. Thank you for reading my poem and for your nice congrats! Sandra :)
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Thank you once again, Eve, for your wonderful visits and wonderful comments. I hope your Easter is blessed and enjoyed! Hugs, Sandra
Gupta Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Congratulations on your nice win with this wonderful burlap and Satin ....
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Probir, thank you so much for your positive comment and congratulations. Much appreciated! Sandra
Lou Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:13 PM
absolutely beautifully told! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Thank you very much, Kitty, for visiting my poem and for your uplifting comment and congrats! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Excellent, Sandra! You've painted us a sweet picture in this WINNING poem! Janice
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. I much appreciate your positive and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Congrats, Sandra, on your wonderful top win. Beautifully done.
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Line, for your visit and uplifting comment. Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 5:35 PM
What a wonderful story teller you are Sandra! The illustration only enhances your poem, but the picture your words paint touches the heart! Loved it!
Haight Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thank you, Carrie, for your very supportive and complimentary comments! Hugs, Sandra
A   Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:45 AM
Nice win... LINDA
Haight Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 11:28 PM
SANDRA, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Beautiful poem and painting Sandra, congratulations on your placement. From Jean
Scars Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Sandra, just beautiful..you are very special and have a wonderful gift...Be blessed *smiles*
Haight Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Hi Laura, I am humbled and thank you so much for your kind words, Thank you.. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 11:56 PM
Poem & painting- A7! Congrats on your placement, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 6:29 AM
Thank you, Balveen for your support and congrats. I wish you and yours a healthy and happy new year. Hugs, Sandra
Tor Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Congratulations Sandra on your win!
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 6:28 AM
Thank you so much, Michael. And, I wish you and yours a healthy and happy new year. Sandra
Negron Flores Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Sandra.
Haight Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Thank you again for sponsoring another great contest, Nayda, and for my nice placement. Happy New Year to you and yours. Hugs, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Well done, congratulations.
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Thank you so much, Richard. I appreciate your stopping by with your congrats. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 10:58 PM
I love the way you did your entry. So glad to finally see this one and congrats for your win.
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I really appreciate your nice comment and congratulations. There were so many different takes on this visual! Thanks again for stopping by. Hugs, Sandra
Poteet Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Well-done piece for the angel in disguise prompt. Congratulations on your interpretation of the picture; I'd place in in the early 1900d's.
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Reason. So nice of your to stop by with your nice comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Sandra, back again to congratulate you on your fantastic win. Blessings dear friend Eve
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Hi Eve, thank you for your nice comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Maharaj Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:53 PM
Aah a beautiful one indeed. Congrats on your win :) love this
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Sasha, so nice of your to stop by with your nice comment and congratulations. I really appreciate it. Sandra
A  Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:13 PM
SANDRA, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Thank you so much, Skat. I appreciate your stopping by. Sandra
A   Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 2:03 PM
Sandra, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Thank yo so much, PD. So nice of your to stop by. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you on your win Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. I always appreciate your comments. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Such a beautiful poem, love the imagery and the subject. Good luck in the contest 7 blessings dear friend eve
Haight Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Eve, I so much appreciate you nice comment and support, as well as best wishes for the contest. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace