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Rispetto

The rispetto lyric is generally composed of eight hendecasyllabic (11-syllable) lines. In its earliest form the rhyme scheme was usually abababcc.

Considered a debonair through and through I got used to the most expensive hotels. And I was catered to and pampered, that's true, oft dinning on steaks and oysters on half shells. But I fell in love with the country in you, and before I knew it, I heard wedding bells; moved to the homestead, and watched the pigs fatten, a combination of burlap and satin. (Rispetto) Mar.16, 2018

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Date: 3/18/2018 11:19:00 PM
Very clever, and enjoyed the Rispetto rhyme scheme, as well! Good luck in the contest :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/19/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Laura, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2018 11:51:00 PM
So nicely composed. I enjoyed each line.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Anisha, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/16/2018 2:21:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Emile. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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