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Burka Woman

Such deep amber green eyes
Stare into me
Like arrows that so delicately pierce my heart
She is covered in a curtain of black woven cloth
Ah but her hair flows like caramel 
She is concealed and wrapped, the camouflage of fear
The burka hiding the princess within
I may not see with my eyes
Oh but how my heart dreams
Of running in the meadows, laughter at our own happiness
Her voice is musical, and softly charms my soul
I am lost in illusions, of this woman in chador
She hides inside this blackness
Her heart protected by dragons
In the dragons lair so deep
I gaze intently into this darkness
I breathe the fire of rejection
I have no chance with this maiden of such beauty
You see
Her dress is blue like the summer breeze
Her hair blonde like the golden skies
She is the desire of many a suitor
As she sleeps in the drum tower
High above all of loves intentions
The bailey her only wanderings
As you see the only burka she ever wore
Was around her heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/30/2014 8:56:00 AM
This one brought to mind the picture of a beautiful young woman in a Burka that was in National Geographic many years ago. I just love how you wrote this one.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 10:59:00 PM
Thank you Richard and yes I remember that issue!
Date: 6/29/2014 5:23:00 AM
such feeling my friend, just like real life, I salute you ...Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 10:59:00 PM
Thank you kindly :)
Date: 6/29/2014 3:24:00 AM
Arthur I love the image of this and the sense of trepidation, well done...David
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 10:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Dave, I always appreciate your nice comments!
Date: 6/28/2014 11:35:00 PM
oh my, you made it symbolic. this is a VERY good one!!!! I love it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 6/28/2014 10:03:00 AM
A top rating for this one Arthur! goes to my favs. It touched my heart. Lovely and yet so sad. Well done. // paul
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:55:00 PM
I feel honored Paul, thank you so much!
Date: 6/28/2014 9:50:00 AM
Ohhhh:( this a so so soooo sad poem Buddy Art..:( written awesome but it's so so so sad and tragic..:(
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Olive, I always appreciate your kind words!
Date: 6/28/2014 7:29:00 AM
Sounds like a perfect beauty.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:54:00 PM
Where ? Where? Thanks Cas!!
Date: 6/28/2014 6:54:00 AM
Dang Arthur there is romance behind the laughter...This will knock her socks off..Very moving piece.
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/30/2014 11:12:00 PM
I know what you mean
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:41:00 PM
I have the socks, just no one to knock them off of! LOL
Date: 6/28/2014 6:53:00 AM
- Burka woman ...... a beautiful princess ... - A lovely poem, Atrhur !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne Lise, I am sure there are many a beautiful princess in Norway!!!!!
Date: 6/28/2014 12:30:00 AM
Lovely lively romantic verse, very interesting Burkha woman, Arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:39:00 PM
Thank you kindly Dr Ram

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