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Burka Woman

Such deep amber green eyes Stare into me Like arrows that so delicately pierce my heart She is covered in a curtain of black woven cloth Ah but her hair flows like caramel She is concealed and wrapped, the camouflage of fear The burka hiding the princess within I may not see with my eyes Oh but how my heart dreams Of running in the meadows, laughter at our own happiness Her voice is musical, and softly charms my soul I am lost in illusions, of this woman in chador She hides inside this blackness Her heart protected by dragons In the dragons lair so deep I gaze intently into this darkness I breathe the fire of rejection I have no chance with this maiden of such beauty You see Her dress is blue like the summer breeze Her hair blonde like the golden skies She is the desire of many a suitor As she sleeps in the drum tower High above all of loves intentions The bailey her only wanderings As you see the only burka she ever wore Was around her heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/30/2014 8:56:00 AM
This one brought to mind the picture of a beautiful young woman in a Burka that was in National Geographic many years ago. I just love how you wrote this one.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 10:59:00 PM
Thank you Richard and yes I remember that issue!
Date: 6/29/2014 5:23:00 AM
such feeling my friend, just like real life, I salute you ...Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 10:59:00 PM
Thank you kindly :)
Date: 6/29/2014 3:24:00 AM
Arthur I love the image of this and the sense of trepidation, well done...David
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/4/2014 10:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Dave, I always appreciate your nice comments!
Date: 6/28/2014 11:35:00 PM
oh my, you made it symbolic. this is a VERY good one!!!! I love it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 6/28/2014 10:03:00 AM
A top rating for this one Arthur! goes to my favs. It touched my heart. Lovely and yet so sad. Well done. // paul
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:55:00 PM
I feel honored Paul, thank you so much!
Date: 6/28/2014 9:50:00 AM
Ohhhh:( this a so so soooo sad poem Buddy Art..:( written awesome but it's so so so sad and tragic..:(
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Olive, I always appreciate your kind words!
Date: 6/28/2014 7:29:00 AM
Sounds like a perfect beauty.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:54:00 PM
Where ? Where? Thanks Cas!!
Date: 6/28/2014 6:54:00 AM
Dang Arthur there is romance behind the laughter...This will knock her socks off..Very moving piece.
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/30/2014 11:12:00 PM
I know what you mean
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:41:00 PM
I have the socks, just no one to knock them off of! LOL
Date: 6/28/2014 6:53:00 AM
- Burka woman ...... a beautiful princess ... - A lovely poem, Atrhur !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne Lise, I am sure there are many a beautiful princess in Norway!!!!!
Date: 6/28/2014 12:30:00 AM
Lovely lively romantic verse, very interesting Burkha woman, Arthur
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/30/2014 9:39:00 PM
Thank you kindly Dr Ram

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