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Buried

Secrets buried run far and deep
Though not truly hidden
The stars seem to know
Those paths where few tend to go

With every step the heart does leap
In twilight's glow, a figure waits
But only the brave dare to creep

Those stars with knowing eyes 
Guard the truth, a promise to keep
A treasure lost that cannot wait

If you seek what has been lost in time
Listen~ maybe nature will point the way
Seek the secrets while still in your prime

For in the dark where secrets are kept
You'll find a hidden part of yourself
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 9:31 PM
Some truths are hidden from all eyes. Perhaps the stars know them. But they will not disclose them. Yet nature may show the way to unravel them. Beautiful poem, smooth flowing.
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 4:56 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Yes, God knows all but He will not tell because some secrets are between the person who is trying to hide them and God, who will reveal them when the time comes only between that person and God. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 8:19 PM
Profound, Sara. So much to contemplate. ~ gw
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 3:01 AM
Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the nice comments. Sara K
La France Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 2:00 PM
Sara, beautifully penned ~
Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 2:47 PM
Thank you, Constance. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K
Delegans Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 11:41 AM
This has a smooth and natural flow with great introspection. Nicely done, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 2:46 PM
Why, thank you, Christopher. I appreciate the visit and nice review. Sara K
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