Burial

a small plot of tears overflowing discerned ground uprooted now covered friendship overturned

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Vickey Rhymer

Date: 2/11/2024 1:28:00 PM

Dear Gershon ,I am sorry for your loss.Am dealing with deaths sting myself as lost my sister of the spirit Thursday.Sheila was a sparkling jewel that tried to comfort and assure to her last breath.She will be remembered with love for my lifes remainder.Once more ,my condolance.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2024 6:03:00 AM

Wow…really good and sad too. So sorry for your loss.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/9/2024 4:57:00 AM

Hi Gershon. Well expressed in this powerful poem. I am sorry to hear about your loss. My thoughts are with you. Take care. :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/9/2024 4:42:00 AM

a deep and sad poem, Gershon...sorry to see you lost a dear friend. My heart goes out to you...

Deb M

Date: 2/9/2024 4:39:00 AM

A deep one BB! Sad…..Debx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2024 10:59:00 PM

I think this one has deep symbolic meaning. So much uprooting going on in our world today for different reasons no wonder people are weeping. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/8/2024 9:24:00 PM

A sad poem. It has depth and emotion.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/8/2024 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for your appreciation of this one. It is based on someone I know well who passed away this week.