BUOYANCY

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BUOYANCY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A boat drifts softly, hull like a feathered whisper, tracing sky and sea. In its wake, a gentle sigh—clarity in the vast blue. Buoyant, I drift free, the weight of time slips away. Crystal waters gleam. My thoughts thoughts dart like fish in the deep. The boat softly sways. Joy, a vessel on this sea, carries me onward. I sail forth, heart wide open, sailor of my own delight.

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/29/2025 4:47:00 PM

Your voice in these Tankas is so clear. It reads like a drink of iced tea. Your poetry is uplifting and inspiring, Sara. A FAV for you today! A poet friend down the hall, Bill

Mickey Grubb

Date: 7/29/2025 3:13:00 PM

Sara, that blend of clarity, quiet joy, and release of burdens evokes a spiritual buoyancy without ever naming it outright. Nicely done. The image reminds me of a clear lake near my childhood home.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/29/2025 4:44:00 PM

awww, I appreciate your kind words and encouraging comments. I'm glad the image stirred a childhood memory. Awesome. Thanks for your visit and have a splendid evening, Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/29/2025 10:53:00 AM

I love the photo. It say Heaven on earth. It brings back memories when Uncle took us on boat rides.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/29/2025 4:44:00 PM

thanks for visiting, John, and for your comments. I'm grateful the poem trigged some memories for you. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/29/2025 5:12:00 AM

A perfect trust...we just know. Embryonic spiritual suspension, totally aware of God's love and eternally supporting, enfolding beauty and grace. Wow! Great writing! You get a FAV!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/29/2025 4:45:00 PM

I'm grateful, Joe, that you appreciated the deeper context in this poem. I'm grateful for the FAV and support. Have a blessed evening, Sara