Bunny

-Bunny Hole- by:SKAT hidden muddy home dirty paws, good boy' good boy! yummy with carrots :) ---------------------------- -Unwanted Fluffiness- by:PD Big Brown Burlap Bag drop Bunnies down By the Bay Better off -Blue grave ~SKAT & PD~

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Hope Warmoth

Date: 6/22/2016 3:07:00 PM

nice write Shat!!!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/21/2016 7:13:00 PM

Hi Skat, i don't want to be no bunny no more. Now Linda, how could you throw me in the river when you see such a cute face, I looked in the mirror throw me in. 2 Haiku for the price of one, this is my day. I Love both, a seven and a fave, even though i am a bunny Lover....Vlad.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 2/2/2016 6:49:00 AM

All together lovely. I watch from kitchen window, family of bunnies and place small carrots and water for close up shootings.

Robyn Campbell

Date: 12/30/2015 6:42:00 PM

I like the way you brought two different pov here, SKAT and Linda. We have a bunny family living on a farm. They eat the veggies in the garden. They have little bellies. So I don't mind. XOXO

David Aaron

Date: 12/22/2015 12:50:00 AM

Very sad....very beautiful.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/16/2015 11:53:00 AM

This is so sad...soul sadness. Mele Kalikimaka SKAT! Aloha, Connie

Lu Loo

Date: 11/10/2015 3:00:00 PM

I have a domesticated fluffy white bunny names Lucky and he sure gets dirty feet! And loves carrots :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/31/2015 9:12:00 AM

My my, quite the contrast!

James Inman

Date: 10/22/2015 10:50:00 AM

Great Haiku, SKAT. Interesting duality on the first one. The smiley face would initially lead one to believe it to be a sweet cute bunny in his home, but of course the last line leads you to believe your having him for dinner and the smiley face turns into a nice sick little twist. I like it! Of course it could a metaphor for something that has nothing to do with bunnies.

Alesia Leach

Date: 9/10/2015 5:09:00 PM

I love bunnies, it is sad they are both about death and I definitely don't want to eat them.

Edlynn Nau

Date: 8/22/2015 11:22:00 PM

Both Bunny Haiku's are very good! I'm just too sad about the Bun Bun's in the drink! I'm pleased about the ones in the muddy den!

Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2015 3:17:00 PM

Both writes are great and thanks for visiting my poem, Senryu 13

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/26/2015 2:56:00 AM

Oh, polar perspectives! Btw, SKAT, just want to say you're just the sweetest! I just love the selfless way you make use of things at your disposal to show you care for people. What you did for Aiyah is really nice! Luv yah, SKAT!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2015 12:29:00 AM

Hopping by the bunny poems again. To say HELLO!!

Michael Dom

Date: 6/13/2015 11:43:00 PM

You two and rabbit stew. Delicious!

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 5/25/2015 7:00:00 PM

Fascinating haiku, interesting picture of bunny (he's a boy?) Nice and delightful.

Eileen Marie

Date: 4/27/2015 3:13:00 PM

Cute poem!

Gail Debole

Date: 3/17/2015 6:04:00 PM

Two very different points of view! Like the poetry, though...

Daniel Muntemba

Date: 3/9/2015 5:14:00 PM

Jordan Miller

Date: 11/17/2014 11:23:00 AM

lol this poem is so cute and it brought a smile to my face -Jordan

Edward Orozco

Date: 8/28/2014 11:11:00 PM

Nicely done! =)

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

Date: 8/6/2014 8:09:00 AM

Nice imagery!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2014 5:09:00 PM

Hi, Skat and PD!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2014 7:52:00 PM

these are kind of sad actually. what inspired you two to do bunny poems? I sure enjoyed seeing this. I can't recall if I already saw it or not! Maybe I did. anyway, just wanted to say hi to you tonight.

Jack Horne

Date: 4/12/2014 3:47:00 PM

lol, love your sense of fun xx