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Bunnies Welcome Spring

As a kid I had three bunnies, they were free I paid no moneys. It was Easter time, I had won them and they were all mine. I had to decorate eggs, some were painted with heads. I entered eggs and the total was three, when I won three bunnies I thought I was going to pee. My mom almost died, but she gave us all a ride. Home to tell my dad, he was very glad.

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Jeanette Brewin

Date: 3/12/2024 1:51:00 AM

A lovely bunny poem. My son has 3 house rabbits. They are so cute!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/12/2024 8:02:00 AM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. As a child I loved my bunnies. They were so much fun to play with. Happy Easter Blessings..........

Karen Jones

Date: 2/29/2024 8:18:00 AM

What a warm memory and how thrilling to win 3 bunnies! Wow I bet they multiplied!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/1/2024 12:20:00 PM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. Each spring I think about this great/fun memory. We had them for about one year. We moved/bunnies could not go with us. No news bunnies/all male... Happy Easter Blessings..........

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/28/2024 11:44:00 AM

What a lovely memory, not just one bunny but three. You must have had a wonderful childhood Paula, anyone would agree… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2024 2:58:00 PM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. Great memories are the best kind to have. This was one of a few of them. Happy Easter Blessings..........

Silent One

Date: 2/28/2024 11:21:00 AM

My dear friend, your poem evokes a sense of innocence and joy associated with childhood memories, particularly those intertwined with Easter festivities. The simplicity of the language and the rhyming scheme contribute to the playful tone, reflecting the excitement and wonderment experienced by the young speaker upon winning three bunnies.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2024 2:55:00 PM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write to evoke a sense of innocence/joy associated with childhood memories/Easter. Each Easter I remember that fun bunny day. Great memories are the best kind to have... Happy Easter Blessings...................

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/27/2024 4:29:00 PM

Paula I loved your three Bunnies story. Its fresh and sweet, and totally unique. To me the most important thing in writing for people's pleasure is to create something that no one else has created. Something they are reading for the first time. Your poem is exactly that and it will be remembered. Well done and Happy Easter when it rolls around this year dear Paula. From Wen

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2024 2:50:00 PM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you loved my fun three "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. I think it is sweet/totally unique because it is a True Story... I know it is early but Happy Easter Blessings..........

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/27/2024 2:12:00 PM

Paula, this is so special. Thanks for sharing this. I love bunnies. I had two when I was young and then had some for years in adulthood. I am happy to hear about your sweet experience. Keep up the great writing. Blessings :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2024 2:45:00 PM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write to be so special. I still love bunnies. Each Easter this is still a fun/great memory... Happy Easter Blessings...................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/25/2024 4:22:00 PM

Dear Paula, Bunnies brings back the heartwarming memories of childhood innocence and Easter traditions. The simple, conversational style captures the excitement of winning the three bunnies and the funny chaos that followed. The image of you about to "pee" from excitement is genuinely amusing, while details like mom almost dying (of laughter, hopefully) and dad being "very glad" add to the delightful picture. It's a nostalgic and endearing poem that evokes a sense of family and springtime joy. - Blessings, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2024 2:40:00 PM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. Mom was not happy I had won the 3 bunnies. (Mad) Dad thought it was great. Each Easter I remember that fun day. Great memories are the best kind to have... Happy Easter Blessings..........

Lin Lane

Date: 2/25/2024 2:01:00 PM

Three bunnies sprung on Mom at once. Oh, my but it seems your parents were happy for you. You must've had a great childhood, Paula. I loved your bunny tale. Great story from an 8-year-old.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2024 2:38:00 PM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you loved my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" tale/write. Mom was not happy I had won the bunnies. Each Easter I remember that day. Great memories are the best... Happy Easter Blessings.........

Karen Jones

Date: 2/25/2024 1:13:00 PM

What a fun poem! I laughed at the witty had no monies! Good luck in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/28/2024 2:34:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your Good Luck. Glad you laughed at my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. It was fun to write. True Story... Happy Easter Blessings............

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/25/2024 11:05:00 AM

Lovely childhood memories Paula, bet it seems like only yesterday. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2024 11:26:00 AM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. Yes, what a great/lovely childhood memory. Each spring I think about that fun day when I was 8 and won the bunnies. Good memories are the best kind to have. Hope this weekend is a great one for you... Happy Easter Blessings.........

Bill Baker

Date: 2/25/2024 10:39:00 AM

I'm glad your parents were supportive of your efforts and the prizes, the bunnies. A fun Easter season poem, my friend. Have a pleasant Sunday! Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2024 11:19:00 AM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. My mom was Not happy. I really won 6 but she would only let me take 3 home. My dad thought it was great I had a pet. (3 pets) Happy Easter Blessings..........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/25/2024 10:29:00 AM

what a precious memory. I received baby chicks one Easter...I literally loved them to death. Anyway, I digress. I enjoyed your poem. have a great day! hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2024 11:16:00 AM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write. Young kids love live animals. This memory from the spring when I was 8 was a good one... Happy Easter Blessings..........

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/25/2024 9:42:00 AM

Paula, your poetry expresses the preciousness, thrill, and deep joy of having such great memories. Grace and energy give your poem an appealing flow and inspiring vibrancy.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2024 11:13:00 AM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write to have grace/energy. Good old memories are the best kind to have. This one from the spring when I was 8 was a good one... Happy Easter Blessings...............

Ink Empress

Date: 2/25/2024 8:51:00 AM

Awwn thats so precious and exciting, and how wonderful to have such lovely memories that you could tell us all through poetry now. Love the flow and energy of this truly! Pleasure always reading your work. Best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2024 11:10:00 AM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my fun "Bunnies Welcome Spring" write to be so precious/exciting. It was fun to bring back good old memories from the spring when I was 8... Happy Easter Blessings...............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/25/2024 8:04:00 AM

Bunnies Welcome Spring ~ Date Written:2/25/2024 ~ True Story. I was 8 years old....