Bundle of Joy

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born baby beautiful breathes...so soft bliss bawls bottle bedtime cry breastfed...instead boy

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2019 10:51:00 AM

Ha, ha! I guess the first stanza was about a baby girl... or it might well have been. :) gw

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2019 1:32:00 PM

Well done, Charles , and a great subject to tackle. This was not an easy form. I ignored the first contest because I didn't think I could do it, but after reading the winners list maybe I should have had tried. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/10/2019 10:50:00 PM

Indeed!! Babies are a Bundle of Joy. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Beautifully written Charlie. ~ Brandy

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/10/2019 5:25:00 PM

Beautiful Lantern brilliantly written dear, Charles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2019 1:58:00 PM

Cute one, Charles. REmember that song of Lennons? Beautiful beautiful beautiful baby boy.

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2019 11:16:00 AM

Charles, you lanterns are delightful, I love them ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/10/2019 9:43:00 AM

Hi Charlie, You did a great job with the contest theme.It caused me to go back down memory lane and think about when my kids were babies. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Sunday to you too:-) Alexis