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born 
baby 
beautiful 
breathes...so soft 
bliss 

bawls 
bottle 
bedtime cry 
breastfed...instead 
boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/14/2019 10:51:00 AM
Ha, ha! I guess the first stanza was about a baby girl... or it might well have been. :) gw
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Date: 3/11/2019 1:32:00 PM
Well done, Charles , and a great subject to tackle. This was not an easy form. I ignored the first contest because I didn't think I could do it, but after reading the winners list maybe I should have had tried. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/10/2019 10:50:00 PM
Indeed!! Babies are a Bundle of Joy. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Beautifully written Charlie. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/10/2019 5:25:00 PM
Beautiful Lantern brilliantly written dear, Charles
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Date: 3/10/2019 1:58:00 PM
Cute one, Charles. REmember that song of Lennons? Beautiful beautiful beautiful baby boy.
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Date: 3/10/2019 11:16:00 AM
Charles, you lanterns are delightful, I love them ~
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Date: 3/10/2019 9:43:00 AM
Hi Charlie, You did a great job with the contest theme.It caused me to go back down memory lane and think about when my kids were babies. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy Sunday to you too:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/10/2019 8:14:00 AM
you did this very well Charlie..
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Date: 3/10/2019 7:51:00 AM
Your poem is a bundle of joy..blissful..beautiful. Well done, Charles.
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Date: 3/9/2019 11:24:00 PM
love the play on allitertaion, and a greeat lanterne as well, charles... winning wishes!..huggs
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Date: 3/9/2019 9:36:00 PM
I love all of these B's, the continuity is wonderful. Good luck in the contest, Charles.
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