Bum's Portrait

He sits with his head upon his hands
His eyes are red
And water that glued the sands
Sun sucked, slithered from the sandy bed
His thoughts are the hourglass
Grains of meaning mincing away
His castle was the sheltered pass
Tomorrow in today decay.

The officer who came to the door 
Polite as an exterior of class
Knocked his ego to the floor
Set his emotions to tinder like grass
Dry as the cinders of his life:
It was she who picked up the knife
She who wanted out as wife
So many things unspoken, so much rife

And he cannot own that argument again
He lost in the public sphere
While he was at the war enduring pain
Treason was a shift of change here.
The officer asked him if he had somewhere
To go ... leaving the house his hands built
He wandered through the cold night air
Racked by conscience alternating guilt.

Then here ... to sit and muse alone
Rejecting interventions of the court
To share what was his own
He relinguished property and support
Except from the sweet distil of fruit
And wanders between the staggering eye
Victim of an altered truth
Forgotten mortal under infallible sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/5/2009 2:38:00 AM
My eyes are indeed blessed to read your work.......!!!! what more can I say....??? Excellent!!!!
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:44:00 PM
This poem completely draws you in and surrounds you with emotion, begging the next words to come. I love the imagery of the 1st verse, concluded perfectly with the very last line. Simply divine! Kat x
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:40:00 AM
Another cracking poem L'nass, how lucky we are, James.
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:40:00 AM
Ahhh..words transcribed by this veritable poetic angel. Your muse must cradle your heart and soul. A tender and soulful write; a sad and sensitive story. Beautiful!! God bless you and yours...love, Mikki
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Date: 5/8/2009 7:42:00 PM
holy tomato!!! you speak with blessed heart, my friend.....it just cannot be said any better than your story...how quickly we pass by.....
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Date: 5/8/2009 11:46:00 AM
how hard it is when love ends this way,how hard it is to live again,forgotten mortal under infallible sky,this brought me sadness and made me think deep--wonderful write my friend---charma
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Date: 5/7/2009 5:55:00 AM
A touching write. Filled with so much pain the emotion literally lifts from the page and engulfs the reader with sadness. Very well done. As always your writing draws the reader in making them long for the story to continue. This one calls out for some happiness to come to the subject to give it that happy ending we all hope for. Beautiful but sad. Have a great day and thank you for all of your kind comments! Smiles from Lolita
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