Notes About The Poem

This poem is included in my Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  Published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

Bumbly Bees

I loves … I loves … 
Bumbly Bees,
With skinny legs
And big fat knees.

With golden rings
And black ones too,
They buzzy buzz
As all bees do.

They hover low
As they have planned,
Choose a flower
And then they land.

Grabs some pollen
And buzzes away,
But will be back
One bumbly day.

I loves … I loves … 
Bumbly Bees,
With skinny legs
And big fat knees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Awtry Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 3:04 AM
This should be a children’s book. The flow is just perfect. :)
Blake Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 11:16 PM
That is a lovely positive and very kind comment ... Thank you for making it ~ Clive :)
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