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Bumblebees

I was a lad of seven

When attacked by bumblebees

Those little fellers bite me

Since I chose to run!


They were provoked I admit

By my Pappy pulling stumps

The moral is stand don't run

Else dear Vie you're stung


Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 3 in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" Contest - April 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/13/2012 10:31:00 PM Bob H., Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD Login to Reply

Mitch White Date: 4/30/2012 6:31:00 AM I love it Bob. You are always on the mark\\\\\Bite... Haha Congrats. PSS I Have to tell you that there are more than a few friends around that want to applaud your writing of "cemetery sounds(;<) Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/16/2012 9:21:00 PM Congrats on your win, Bob! I loved your nostalgic bite. Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 11:55:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Bob. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/15/2012 1:59:00 AM Congratulations on your super win Robert xx Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/14/2012 8:54:00 PM Very nice Robert and a great win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/14/2012 8:50:00 PM Ouch, you got Vie. Congratulations on your win, Bob. Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/14/2012 8:12:00 PM Congratulations Bob on your win...cleverly done...big hugs,love deb Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/14/2012 7:32:00 PM congrats Bob on a super win for this sensational entry luv.. bzzz Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/8/2012 6:37:00 AM This is a very good spot !!! - Luck to you in contest! :) - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/8/2012 5:46:00 AM Reads like a winner..Those bees are something that one doesn't want to play with...Good luck in the contest.Thanks for stopping by my work about Down In the Boondocks..Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/8/2012 5:47:00 AM 'tweren't me that was sick but on the way back I was..That diarrhea bug is contagious..Sara

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/7/2012 10:58:00 PM Bob H,. ha ha..love it.. and nice bite... good luck in the contest.. have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD Login to Reply

Nadia Shahwan Date: 4/7/2012 12:57:00 PM This poem made me happy. Keep on writing. Login to Reply