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Bumblebee Bumblebee

rumble bumblebee in flight
little ball of dynamite
winged pollen hoarder 
with your sweet nectar
honey soothes my appetite



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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November 14, 2018 at 3:58 PM

Nicely-done, Line!! I especially like the rhythm of the opening: "rumble bumble...". Regards, John.

November 14, 2018 at 5:54 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.

November 14, 2018 at 9:00 AM

Wonderful!

November 14, 2018 at 5:56 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.

October 28, 2018 at 6:36 PM

I love when I see bees in my garden. Nicely written.

October 28, 2018 at 6:53 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit, Wren. I'd love to see your garden.

October 28, 2018 at 4:31 PM

Love it! Perhaps a bit about love too :)

October 28, 2018 at 6:20 PM

Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Kim.

October 28, 2018 at 11:18 AM

This made me smile. Thank you.

October 28, 2018 at 6:20 PM

Thanks for your fun visit and comment, PS.

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2018 at 11:14 AM

how cute can this BEE!!!

October 28, 2018 at 6:20 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Mahtab Bangalee

October 28, 2018 at 6:01 AM

honey soothe my appetite /// o soothing

October 28, 2018 at 8:50 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Mahtab.

October 28, 2018 at 4:30 AM

Memories of summertime , Look forward to their return. Nice limerick Line. Tom.

October 28, 2018 at 8:51 AM

Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.

October 28, 2018 at 4:13 AM

what a sweet limerick Line:-) hugs Jan xx

October 28, 2018 at 8:51 AM

Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

October 28, 2018 at 1:30 AM

Such fine honey, sweet to find. -Richard

October 28, 2018 at 8:56 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.

Caren Krutsinger

October 27, 2018 at 11:31 PM

The word rumble is perfect in that the word rumble sounds and looks like the bumble bee, Line. I like this one a lot!

October 28, 2018 at 8:56 AM

Thanks, Caren, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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