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Bumblebee Bumblebee

rumble bumblebee in flight little ball of dynamite winged pollen hoarder with your sweet nectar honey soothes my appetite AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on October 27, 2018

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John Michaels
Date: 11/14/2018 3:58:00 PM
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Nicely-done, Line!! I especially like the rhythm of the opening: "rumble bumble...". Regards, John.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2018 5:54:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
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Mike Hauser
Date: 11/14/2018 9:00:00 AM
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Wonderful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2018 5:56:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/28/2018 6:36:00 PM
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I love when I see bees in my garden. Nicely written.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 6:53:00 PM
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Thank you for your lovely visit, Wren. I'd love to see your garden.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2018 4:31:00 PM
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Love it! Perhaps a bit about love too :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 6:20:00 PM
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Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Kim.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/28/2018 11:18:00 AM
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This made me smile. Thank you.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 6:20:00 PM
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Thanks for your fun visit and comment, PS.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/28/2018 11:14:00 AM
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how cute can this BEE!!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 6:20:00 PM
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Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 10/28/2018 6:01:00 AM
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honey soothe my appetite /// o soothing
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 8:50:00 AM
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Thanks for your visit and comment, Mahtab.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/28/2018 4:30:00 AM
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Memories of summertime , Look forward to their return. Nice limerick Line. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 8:51:00 AM
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Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/28/2018 4:13:00 AM
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what a sweet limerick Line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 8:51:00 AM
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Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/28/2018 1:30:00 AM
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Such fine honey, sweet to find. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Richard.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/27/2018 11:31:00 PM
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The word rumble is perfect in that the word rumble sounds and looks like the bumble bee, Line. I like this one a lot!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
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Thanks, Caren, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

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