Rizwana Bhurani Poet Limerick

Bum Burns

 
                            Bum Burns
                       In the nearby park Uncle Johnny
                       With a big full round tummy
                       Touched group of red ants
                       They ran up in his pants
                       Badly bit poor Johnny's bummy.
                       
             


                Contest:Limerick II
                Sponsor:Jan Allison
                 21.02 15

                            

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Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 12:18 AM Rizwana, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~

Rizwana Bhurani March 8, 2016 at 2:44 AM It's fine Jan.....thnk you.....if you cld just guide me to correct myself ...I'll be obliged....I ll edit this poem for bttr....regards

Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 9:29 AM Congrats Rizwana - you would have placed higher if the end rhyme and syllable count had been more consistent:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper March 6, 2016 at 8:39 PM haha... nice write, Rizwana, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve Rizwana Bhurani March 8, 2016 at 2:44 AM Thnk you......regards

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 7:41 PM haha. cute one. Congrats for win. Rizwana Bhurani March 8, 2016 at 2:45 AM Thnk you....regards

Rizwana Bhurani February 27, 2016 at 10:08 AM Thnk you...regards

Susan Gentry February 27, 2016 at 8:35 AM Lol! Cute.