Bully

Bully. Restless, angry hurt streaks out in scorching words like hot oil from a frying pan. Bully. Bailing pain out in laughter and violence nobody sees you sinking. Bully. Drowned from within.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/17/2024 8:46:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Yuhi Musinga

Date: 7/13/2016 1:43:00 AM

Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2016 12:40:00 PM

- Hi Nikki - Thanks for your first deeply moving poems, well written:) - Poems can say much or little - A poem tells me, thoughts, wishes, dreams, wisdom, happy or sad ...... deepness or powerfully - Most of all, have fun and welcome to PoetrySoup :) - // Sun :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2016 10:48:00 AM

Nikki Christie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/7/2016 1:57:00 AM

Nikki, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs

Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 1:30:00 AM

Sad tO See thIs one FROM you, Nikki Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

Date: 5/7/2016 12:27:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Nikki. :)