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Bullseye

Concern of his “how long he lasts” Deserves loud laughter. What matters is how long he lasts - Before and after. To be precise, the charming part, That hits the Gold spot, Hides in the hollows of his heart - She forgets-him-not. May 21, 2021

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Date: 6/1/2021 1:13:00 PM
Lovely pen Margarita, lovely rhyme and flow with you've hit the bullseye!
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Date: 5/25/2021 6:47:00 AM
Sometimes guys fail to look at the big picture and are only concerned about the here and now, a good woman will always assure him that it is the big picture that matters. Nicely penned, Maggie, I'm sure you are a good woman. Hugs.
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Date: 5/21/2021 10:26:00 AM
Clever! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/21/2021 9:16:00 AM
Oh, that's so cute, Margarita. I think Line will enjoy it as much as I did. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2021 9:08:00 AM
ha ha ha love it great innuendo :-) hugs Jan xx (the captcha is aha!!!)
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