Margarita Lillico Poet Quatrain

Bullseye

Concern of his “how long he lasts”
Deserves loud laughter.
What matters is how long he lasts -
Before and after.

To be precise, the charming part, 
That hits the Gold spot, 
Hides in the hollows of his heart - 
She forgets-him-not. 


May 21, 2021

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Gordon Mcconnell June 1, 2021 at 1:13 PM Lovely pen Margarita, lovely rhyme and flow with you've hit the bullseye!

John Gondolf May 25, 2021 at 6:47 AM Sometimes guys fail to look at the big picture and are only concerned about the here and now, a good woman will always assure him that it is the big picture that matters. Nicely penned, Maggie, I'm sure you are a good woman. Hugs.

Rico Leffanta May 21, 2021 at 10:26 AM Clever! Aloha! Rico

Carolyn Devonshire May 21, 2021 at 9:16 AM Oh, that's so cute, Margarita. I think Line will enjoy it as much as I did. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison May 21, 2021 at 9:08 AM ha ha ha love it great innuendo :-) hugs Jan xx (the captcha is aha!!!)