Bukowski

Was it said before? Sure.
Was it said this way? I doubt it.
Perspective is in no way obscure,
And his works are nothing without it.

His motivation’s observed in daily life,
Misery, not just some vague inspiration.
He begs for reason, some way to lessen strife;
His words reflect a resounding desperation.

There seems a need at times to clarify, 
But that’s allowed in his terms only;
So many thoughts seem somewhat ‘rarefied’,
Fed his fire, but made him lonely.

No ‘underachiever’, not just another fool,
But still seeking solace by the glass;
Tempering his stagger and his drool 
With just a bit of ‘kiss my ass.’ 

But, usually, genius ‘sots’ come to ground,
Lucid moments - on the square;
Their driving ‘bolts’ of genius, word or sound,
Only written because they dare.

Yes, you can feel the written “heart”,
But few of us can realize that sort of pain;
No isolated misery… of many lives a part,
Each begs an answer... “Who’ll stop the rain?”

Yes, he’s lived it, seen it, and told it well;
But Timing is the Master of one’s Fate.
Is the timing right?  Funny…only time will tell…
Will you will be a whining sot or dare to be great?

One success can be lucky, we’ve seen that before.
One book, one song, then quietly fade away.
But six novels later, we should know the score;
He must have had something to say.

So, at the perfect time, someone heard.
Someone who was “someone” took someone under wing.
And to those with interest and empathy, they sold his words;
Saying they “are genius” and with “ugly truth” they ring.

But did he create any redeeming changes or impacts?
Yes, what singular influence did all his artful whining bring?
None... just a relentless, repetitive diatribe of sad facts.
Oh, yes…..and a little “ching ching”.

Entered in the "Idiot or Genius" contest 27 March 2014

not so genius
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 11, 2014 at 10:42 PM
HI ROBERT, Congratulations, on your win:) Enjoyed stopping by. LUV ~SKAT~
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April 11, 2014 at 9:41 PM
Robert, Congratulations, In Amy's Idiot or Genius, contest.... Enjoyed the win.... ~ Linda
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April 11, 2014 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in the Bukowski Contest, robert
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April 10, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Congratulations on your first place win in Amy's contest. Verlena
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April 10, 2014 at 9:50 PM
Well done Robert. Beautifully written. Verlena
Guzzi Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Well we do not agree BUT I liked your poem too! LOL Congrad's Light & Love
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April 10, 2014 at 7:35 PM
It seems we share perspectives. I really enjoyed your winning poem. Congratulations.
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April 10, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Opinion proved by understanding and perfection in your words. This one blows me away.
A  Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 10:47 PM
a clever poem. Good luck in Amy's contest. . Hugs ~SKAT~
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March 28, 2014 at 8:25 AM
Thanks for the read. I found the guy a little frustrating. I've always tried to "half full", if you know what I mean. My wife says I'm completely full, and I'm sure you know what she means.
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