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Poetry/Verse/Building Tension
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1624-484-27
All Rights Reserve, 2024, Constance La France

Written, February 19, 2024

For the International Contest, This or That, Vol. 23
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 02/29/2024

Third Place

Written using my created form that I have named,  Fragmented Verse.

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"One Road leads to tension and worry; one road leads to fear and dread. My road leads me home to tranquility, to peace, serenity and solitude." Quote by _Constance
A safe haven, a home I call my nest; created piece by piece by piece, fabricated with all the items that I love. Each room a place of peace, like a bird 'building' a nest I have gathered things; beautiful things that bring serenity and joy, this is my safe harbor from life. It is a grand mansion to me, tranquility is in each room; I breathe in the harmony and the solitude. no matter what is happening beyond. Once the door closes I am safe . . . protected within my nest from the strains of life. There is 'tension,' in todays restless world; the constant worry of a war, dread, fear, and malaise at too high-priced groceries. People are under stress, it makes them agitated, hostile, lashing out; there is the threat of global warming- senseless killing. How can I save the animals ? How can I stem world starvation ? Oh, what if I can save just one cat or, dog? Or help a homeless person in some way? Why do I feel like a wilted flower ? And seek the security of my nest . . . that place assembled piece by piece for peace.

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Date: 3/4/2024 8:54:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest with this beautifully composed poem, Constance:-) I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Awesome format!
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:19:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/1/2024 8:14:00 PM
"the constant worry of a war, dread, fear, and malaise at too high-priced groceries. People are under stress, it makes them agitated, hostile, lashing out; there is the threat of global warming- senseless killing. How can I safe the animals ?" - A grand illustration of causes and effects of building tension. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2024 5:20:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the great comment and the congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/1/2024 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your amazing/wonderful "Building Tension" write/quote. I love your pretty flowers & many times feel like them. I say, I am living in a crazy world & we are. What a great ending... Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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