Bugged

In his fancy hotel room James found bed bugs at first he thought he was on too many drugs. But they were real, moving about he wanted to leave, get right out. But a maid came and swept 'em under the rugs.

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 9/4/2016 10:18:00 AM

Please give me the name of that hotel so I know to avoid it Paul, lol! Another fun and humorous write!:)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/4/2016 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Cheryl, for commenting. I understand that many hotels are infested, and hotel managers are at a loss to know what to do about it. The bugs arrive via the luggage of tourists from abroad.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2016 8:15:00 PM

ha ha ha even the top hotels are sweeping the problem under the carpet - eww am itchy now! GREAT one Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/24/2016 6:50:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Your use of great (in all caps, no less) in characterizing one of my poems has me blushing--and ever-so grateful. hugs x x x Paul